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Yaseera Abid
Yaseera Abid
Alwaha Int.school
A Balloon's Life
Published On Jun 12th 2017
Total Comments : 89
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August 2017
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Flying in the air
 
like I'm fair
 
I keep on flying and flying
 
on the bed, I'm never lying
 
I wanted to touch the ground
 
but I can't with the people around
 
so I got popped with a knife
 
this is a balloon's life
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Comments 89
Yaseera Admin when will i get my gift?? Yaseera
Feb 21st 2018
 
 
Yaseera Thanks Aiza I love your choice Yaseera
Feb 20th 2018
 
 
Aiza OMG Yaseera I love your profile pic. It's so cute and Fabulous. Nice choice😉😉😉😉😉 Aiza
Feb 20th 2018
 
 
Yaseera Thank u Fatima Yaseera
Jan 13th 2018
 
 
fatima Congrats yaseera Fatima
Jan 13th 2018
 
 
Yaseera Thank u nisha Yaseera
Jan 5th 2018
 
 
Nisha Congrats... 😊 Nisha
Jan 5th 2018
 
 
Yaseera Thank you Fatima and i have read other stories they are good but when I read your stories they are so attracting and nice Yaseera
Jan 2nd 2018
 
 
Fatima @Yaseera I checked your screen. I'm not the author of here! There are lots of better stories here than mine! Fatima
Jan 2nd 2018
 
 
Fatima Congrats Yaseera my friend😀😀😀 Fatima
Jan 2nd 2018
 
 
Yaseera And Urooj we should not say happy new year or be happy about it because this festival is for christians we only have two festivals Eid and Bakri Eid so pls i am just telling u none of our prophets said happy new year to each other they also not happy about it u should just act normal so from now on pls don't do like that and i am just telling u Yaseera
Jan 2nd 2018
 
 
Yaseera Thank you Urooj Yaseera
Jan 1st 2018
 
 
Yaseera Thank you Urooj Yaseera
Jan 1st 2018
 
 
Urooj Congarts Yaseera I am so happy for u dear. 😘😘and Happy New Year my bff🤗 Urooj
Dec 31st 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thank you everybody and yes your story is a winner too Ayesha Yaseera
Dec 31st 2017
 
 
saad Congratulations Saad
Dec 31st 2017
 
 
Aiza Congrats once again yaseera Aiza
Dec 30th 2017
 
 
Zainab Congratulations.i was very surprised to see your name in winners.keep it up. Zainab
Dec 30th 2017
 
 
Ayesha Oooh CONGRATULATIONS YASEERA! I congratulate you to be a winner of August 2017! You know what? My Story "Aliens" is also a winner of August 2017!! Once again congratulations! Ayesha
Dec 30th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thanks alot Aiza Yaseera
Nov 27th 2017
 
 
yashfeen Your welcome dear Yashfeen
Nov 26th 2017
 
 
Aiza Your welcome Yaseera and you really deserve it. Aiza
Nov 26th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Ok no need i saw thanks Yaseera
Nov 25th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Aiza and Yashfeen I cant see the winners in VSHINE facebook page tell me how?? i can only see Augest 2017 winners Yaseera
Nov 25th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Omg I am!! I cant believe it and thanks alot my BF Aiza and Yaahfeen 🌷🌸 😊💐 Yaseera
Nov 25th 2017
 
 
yashfeen Yaseera check the vshine Facebook .Your poem Balloons life is declared as winner there.Congratulations🎉🎉🎉🎉🎇🎇🎉🎁 Yashfeen
Nov 22nd 2017
 
 
Aiza Hi Yaseera I am soooo happy wanna know why? I went to v shine facebook page where they had announced the winners of all june,july,august and YOU WERE ONE OF THE WINNERS OF AUGUST. You will get your winner badge soon. Congratulations dear, for more details please visit their facebook page. Aiza
Nov 22nd 2017
 
 
sajahir Great poem Sajahir
Sep 3rd 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thank you for telling me Yashfeen Yaseera
Aug 22nd 2017
 
 
yashfeen Yes Yaseera I do have a Google account. Yashfeen
Aug 18th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Oh I get it Aiza and Urooj wrote me as best friends is that right Is that what you were telling me to see Urooj ? well Thanks a lot and go see my screen and then go in "about me" Ok Aiza , Urooj and Yashfeen you too Yaseera
Aug 3rd 2017
 
 
Yaseera What should i check Urooj your screen? okay i will just check that for now Yaseera
Aug 2nd 2017
 
 
Urooj Yaseera check Aiza and mine plz☺ Urooj
Jul 27th 2017
 
 
Urooj Thanks Yashfeen.😊😊 Urooj
Jul 27th 2017
 
 
yashfeen Thanks Urooj for calling me your friend and you are also my friend here. Yashfeen
Jul 26th 2017
 
 
Tooba Thanks alot yassera😘😘 Tooba
Jul 26th 2017
 
 
Yaseera I did Tooba and thank you Aiza,Zainab and Urooj Yaseera
Jul 26th 2017
 
 
Tooba Yassera please accept my request and love it😚😚😚😇😇😇 Tooba
Jul 25th 2017
 
 
Urooj Check my status. So status mean about me section. And dont forget to check my page and my stuff with poem and article .😊 Urooj
Jul 25th 2017
 
 
Zainab Superb!! Zainab
Jul 25th 2017
 
 
yashfeen Your welcome my friend Yashfeen
Jul 23rd 2017
 
 
yashfeen Your welcome my friend Yashfeen
Jul 23rd 2017
 
 
Aiza I agree with Yashfeen your poem is really nice and has a unique topic. Aiza
Jul 23rd 2017
 
 
Urooj Your welcome yaar ☺🌹💐🌼🌻🌺🌷⚘ Urooj
Jul 22nd 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thank you Soo much Yashfeen you guys are the best and my Best friends%uD83D%uDE0A Yaseera
Jul 21st 2017
 
 
Yaseera really Thank you so much Urooj and say thank you to your sister from me you all are Soo nice😊😊 Yaseera
Jul 20th 2017
 
 
yashfeen Again nice and BTW unique topic Yashfeen
Jul 20th 2017
 
 
Urooj I luv this poem so much and my sis is learning this poem🤗 Urooj
Jul 19th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Wait I am already your friend so do not worry my friend sundas Yaseera
Jul 16th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Umm. Sundos no I didn't got your friend request Yaseera
Jul 16th 2017
 
 
saad Inshaallah Saad
Jul 15th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thank you all Yaseera
Jul 15th 2017
 
 
sundas wow very good poem and yaseera i have snd you a friend request plz accept it Sundas
Jul 15th 2017
 
 
saad Awesome 👍👌 Saad
Jul 14th 2017
 
 
Aliza  Nice! u got my like! Aliza
Jul 14th 2017
 
 
Urooj In SHA ALLAH . Yaseera🤗 Urooj
Jul 14th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Umm. do you guys think will I be the winner well I hope so if you guyz do well say you do i hope InshaAllah Yaseera
Jul 13th 2017
 
 
Safa Yeah pic's cool:) Safa
Jul 11th 2017
 
 
Safa Wonderful! you can be a great poet and the one who is so proud of him can also show his creativity and then we will see who wrote better Safa
Jul 11th 2017
 
 
Mohammed Yes anas always do like this Mohammed
Jul 11th 2017
 
 
Mohammed Yes Mohammed
Jul 11th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thank you all of you it is really good for supporting me and it's okay let him Yaseera
Jul 10th 2017
 
 
Urooj Yes @Aiza you are right.👍🌺 Urooj
Jul 10th 2017
 
 
Aiza @Anas you are being rude to her.You shouldn't write that you can write better.If you could write better than your screen wouldn't be empty.Yaseera don't listen to him.He just wanted to fight.You write really good.☺☺ Aiza
Jul 9th 2017
 
 
Urooj Like from me😘😘 Urooj
Jul 8th 2017
 
 
Urooj Anas dont be so proud🤔 Urooj
Jul 8th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thanks ayesha and your pic is also the logo of equestria girls Yaseera
Jul 4th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thanks fatima Yaseera
Jun 30th 2017
 
 
Ayesha Nice! I like your pic Yaseera! Ayesha
Jun 30th 2017
 
 
Fatima Nice Fatima
Jun 30th 2017
 
 
Yaseera And hi asim Yaseera
Jun 29th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Um... who wrote the comment after anas's comment because I did not somebody must have gone in my profile Yaseera
Jun 29th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Then let's see if the admin posts your poem in the screen where everybody could see that you did not write your poem and told me to write it instead and it was your poem Yaseera
Jun 28th 2017
 
 
Anas Its not a good poem . i can write batter then you. Anas
Jun 28th 2017
 
 
Yaseera And Asim send me a friend request and even the ones who are not my friends like wania etc to become my friend please Yaseera
Jun 28th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thank you everyone for liking my poem Yaseera
Jun 28th 2017
 
 
Mohammad Hi Jazeera i am asim Mohammad
Jun 27th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thank you Soo much Urooj and I will write a story soon InshaAllah Yaseera
Jun 26th 2017
 
 
Urooj This poem is so cool seems like you can write an interesting story.😉 Urooj
Jun 25th 2017
 
 
Urooj Aoa so you also lived in jeddah ksa I also live in jeddah and I know Alwaha school. Urooj
Jun 25th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thanks everyone and please click the like button Yaseera
Jun 19th 2017
 
 
yashfeen Great1 Yashfeen
Jun 17th 2017
 
 
Aiza Your welcome yaseera Aiza
Jun 17th 2017
 
 
Mohammed Azfar COOL POEM Mohammed Azfar
Jun 17th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thank you Yaseera
Jun 17th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Thanks Aiza Yaseera
Jun 17th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Nice Yaseera
Jun 16th 2017
 
 
Aiza Nice Aiza
Jun 16th 2017
 
 
Yaseera Please write a comment if you like it InshaAllah Yaseera
Jun 16th 2017
 
 

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