In December’s cold night, one lonely girl was stood on the lonely street. No one was there but some dogs .They were barking loudly in cold night, but the girl was not paying any attention on them. She was standing but didn't have any shoe in her feet, and she didn't feel coldness of night. She was waiting for someone? She thought!
"You are not here, with me". Her eyes were full of tears and they were slipping on her cheeks.
She was crying loudly. The dogs stop barking, they were gazing at her. She says again "I am incomplete without you" She shouts! "I want you back..... I Love you, and then she sit on the earth and continue crying.
Next morning, a police man saw a dead girl on the street with a picture of a lady. They were searching for her family. And her father and aunt were also searching for her. When they came to the police station, they got the dead body of Claire. Yes her name was Claire and her mother was died before 4 days ago!
Your idea is perfect but there are some grammatical mistakes (dont mind just for your improvement) Very nice indeed! but always remember that there should be happy ending in every story and giving a twist to story can lead to happy ending and it will impress the reader also!