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Nur Siddique
Nur Siddique
The Educators,beacon House System
One Girl
Published On Jul 10th 2011
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In December’s cold night, one lonely girl was stood on the lonely street. No one was there but some dogs .They were barking loudly in cold night, but the girl was not paying any attention on them. She was standing but didn't have any shoe in her feet, and she didn't feel coldness of night. She was waiting for someone? She thought!
"You are not here, with me". Her eyes were full of tears and they were slipping on her cheeks.
She was crying loudly. The dogs stop barking, they were gazing at her. She says again "I am incomplete without you" She shouts! "I want you back..... I Love you, and then she sit on the earth and continue crying.
Next morning, a police man saw a dead girl on the street with a picture of a lady. They were searching for her family. And her father and aunt were also searching for her. When they came to the police station, they got the dead body of Claire. Yes her name was Claire and her mother was died before 4 days ago!
 
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Comments 13
saamia Hi every buddy Saamia
Feb 8th 2014
 
 
saamia Oooooo ..... sad but nic!!! Saamia
Jan 19th 2014
 
 
Junaid U have great confidence . Bcoz u wrote a awesome story..... ! Junaid
Jan 21st 2012
 
 
Maham Nice Maham
Sep 10th 2011
 
 
Bakhita Your idea is perfect but there are some grammatical mistakes (dont mind just for your improvement) Very nice indeed! but always remember that there should be happy ending in every story and giving a twist to story can lead to happy ending and it will impress the reader also! Bakhita
Aug 21st 2011
 
 
Nur Thanks and yes, she was crying for her mother! Nur
Jul 21st 2011
 
 
Wafa Its very sad even iam crying was she crying for her mother? Wafa
Jul 17th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Nice .. Maazazafar
Jul 13th 2011
 
 
Itachi Sad.......but nyc!! Itachi
Jul 13th 2011
 
 
l Oh ok coz the last part was looking like it is a real story L
Jul 12th 2011
 
 
Nur Thanks, well it's not true, I made it! Nur
Jul 12th 2011
 
 
l Is this a real life story or just made by yourself ? L
Jul 10th 2011
 
 
Ashna Sad...nyc story! Ashna
Jul 10th 2011
 
 

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