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Aliza   Aamir
Aliza Aamir
The City School
Survive The Terror (part 4)
Published On May 14th 2017
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As the door knob turned , Ayome charged out with a hammer for her defence. the figure that stood before her startled her. the figure held a hatchet in his hand.( hatchet is a type of axe). the figure aimed forward in attempt to attack . Ayome backed away and as the figure advanced forward she dodged him and ran outside. Mindlessly she ran inside the same dreaded forest. As she stopped to catch her breath she heard loud laughing coming from behind. she tilted her head , just to find a assasin like figure emerging from the east side of the forest , now in the luminous light of moon, ayome was able to see the person who chased her here. the emotionless figure first stood quietly and then said" So do you really think that a journalist like you can tell the world about our existence? You cannot even survive this forest. Rest in peace you fool!" as he said that he threw his hatchet towards a tree. this was quite odd but little did ayome knew that he was providing a signal for the rest to come. As he did that he ran away somewhere in the bushes. as he escaped Ayome searched herself for something, anything for her self-defence.
Suddenly her fingers caught hold of her heavy duty flash light which she kept with herself, it still had some blood on it. ayome smirked . " there is no escape!  i willl survive this terror that lurks beneath these woods" ayome screamed. and looked around her . Slow rustling of grass was the only noise that was disturbing the death-like silence. Ayome took a deep breath and decided that no longer playing nice will help she needs to get up.
"krutck...." a mildly loud noise came out from the west side of the forest. ayome turned back. from out of middle of nowhere the black slender figure was advancing towards her , his tentacles floating in air as if they had a mind of their own , the figure being un -humanely tall was about the height of a mansion.with very long hands. the first time ayome saw him, she didn't once saw a mouth but now even in this darkness which was only lightly illuminated by the moon, she found out black jaws coming out of his mouth. as slenderman advanced forward.  ayome tightened her grip on the torch.as she did that . she heard slow thudding on the ground on looking  behind she caught the sight of jeff the same person whom she hitted her with torch. it seemed that there was no way out. Ayome took a deep breath, her legs no longer had the power to run. as she did that she backed up. the atmosphere was filled with total silence. ayome slowly placed her hand inside her pocket, only to find her phone. Without taking the phone out she slowly called 911. the both figures slowly placed their eyes on each other. There was a sudden up roar of anger between the two of them,
" i will kill her, you street pole, she hit me with her torch" jeff said as he pointed towards ayome.
" oh really do you really think that? you pathetic creature!" slenderman replied in a deep voice, this surprised ayome a great deal as she thought that since slenderman is faceless he will not be able to talk.
slenderman furiously grabbed jeff by his neck and tried to strangle him, but jeff in return bit him.as their fight continued ayome.....
what did ayome did?
who is gonna win?
to know all of this catch on the final part of survive the terror.
(ok guys so this was the second last part, the new character (the one with the hatchet) is ticci toby and owned by Kastoway and yup he is a creepypasta. while like always jeff n slenderman are the legal property of their respective owner. while i own the rights of ayome. bye bye guys)
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Maheen Aliza what is your google + account Maheen
Jul 15th 2017
 
 
Aliza  @maheen i am currently working on the surprise so it might take a while Aliza
Jul 14th 2017
 
 
Maheen Aliza plz send the last part of this story I am waiting for it anxiously I want to read the last part as soon as possible Maheen
Jul 13th 2017
 
 
Amna Excellent Amna
Jul 11th 2017
 
 
Fatima So amazing Fatima
May 25th 2017
 
 
Aliza  A MESSAGE FOR EVERYONE! since posting arts on vshine is a bit slow. i will suggest you to go to my personal google + or google blog to receive your requests fast. my google+ account shall have new updates every friday. plus my new novel HEATHENS is also available. along with animations etc.(i am also an animator). thnx for cooperation. Aliza
May 24th 2017
 
 
Aliza  A MESSAGE FOR EVERYONE! since posting arts on vshine is a bit slow. i will suggest you to go to my personal google + or google blog to receive your requests fast. my google+ account shall have new updates every friday. plus my new novel HEATHENS is also available. along with animations etc.(i am also an animator). thnx for cooperation. Aliza
May 24th 2017
 
 
Aliza  @amna use a computer or laptop for posting arts. Aliza
May 22nd 2017
 
 
Amna Would you please guide me how to add my drawing too Amna
May 17th 2017
 
 
Berha SUPER GREAT! Berha
May 16th 2017
 
 
Fajr Omair Great. Can't wait for next part Fajr Omair
May 15th 2017
 
 

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