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The Jungle Visit
Published On Jul 8th 2011
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One day Emyle and her family went to the jungle for an exciting trip with their friends. When they reached their point everyone was so exited so Emyle with her friends. While their parents and Emyle’s mother, father and her sister emy stayed at the tree house. While Emyle and the others explored the jungle they so much beautiful animals and enjoyed very much. So Emyle and the others went back home. So after that they ate dinner and slept. The next day when Emyle went back home to pick up something her sister was fainting. She asked her mother ' mom what happened" her mother said, “a giraffe is coming towards us because a pride of lions were attacking him." “Run run!" shouted dad. So everybody ran to Mr Freddy’s tree house.  He had another one because of some reasons. So everybody was safe. So they called the forest in charge and the next day they went back home!
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Comments 7
Oct 21st 2011
Alyina Wrong english is used but the story is very brilliant Alyina
Oct 10th 2011
xerac Nice ...........but ur english is mostly wrong:[ Xerac
Aug 29th 2011
No So wht i wrote it not u No
Jul 25th 2011
Wafa Ok but not good because you have not written in proper english Wafa
Jul 17th 2011
Farha Nyx Farha
Jul 12th 2011
manail Not bad! Manail
Jul 9th 2011

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