Anna’s mother had gone out for some work meantime Anna was getting bored so she went to the garden for a stroll. When she went there she saw a beautiful butterfly, which sat on her, and then everything went pitch black and then she opened her eyes she saw a very beautiful world. She saw fairies all around her. She asked the fairies where she was they told she was in Fairy Land. They showed her around and they took her to the Queen’s palace in a flying carriage. The Queen gave her a magical wand. It could make Anna’s wishes come true. She soon realized it was time her to leave so she bid goodbye and promised to come again. She went home and told her mother about her adventure to Fairy Land. Her mother didn’t believe a single word of hers and told her to go to bed.
Aleesha! Ummm.....I do think that complementing yourselves is also not a good act.I am not being surly but I am just trying to tell you that we shpuld always not complement ourselves or degrade others.
i have sent many things on my page it is going to be almost a year but they still didnt appear on my page. iwrote twice to uncle shine but still got no reply plz try to fix this problem i have been waiting a long time for my stuff to appear i have recently wrote a story called the big mistake please approve it fast
Your vocabulary and spelling are much better than most of the people on Vshine. However the story is the typical fairyland one that we ALWAYS read. I think that you should aim to write a story that is different from everyone else. Do keep writing! Perhaps next time you can try writing a longer one. Until then, keep up the good work :)