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Manail Syeda
Manail Syeda
Hogwarts School Of Witchcraft And Wizardy
The Brave Girl
Published On Jul 1st 2011
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Once there was a lovely girl named Elizabeth. The one thing she loved the most was danger. There was only one reason she loved danger. She loved it because she had never faced any danger.
She was forbidden to go any farther then the garden. Her father would not allow it because one day her mother went beyond the garden to get her scarf that had blown away. She never returned. Elizabeth was also the daughter of the richest man in Teton, where she lived.
In the middle of the night, I can't quite remember what night, she heard a tense knock on the door. Then she herd her father open the door. She couldn't hear every word they said, but she heard some of it. She heard something about them needing to find someone that would capture a dangerous tri-sonic. A tri-sonic is a horse that can run as fast as a cheetah, roar as loud as a lion, has teeth as sharp as a shark, breath as fiery as a dragon, and is as strong as an elephant.
There it was -- her chance to find danger. She quickly packed 2 daggers, 1 shield and sword, 10 gold coins, a rope, armour, and 2 biscuits. She wrote a note to her father that read:
Dear father,
I have run away to find the tri-sonic. Sorry I could not tell you in person. I will return.
Love, Elizabeth
She put the note on her pillow and went out the window to find the Tri-sonic. She followed the street candles until she found a bench. She expected it was the governor who visited her father. So in the morning she put on the armor and went to the governor’s house. She knocked on the door and in a manly voice said, "I am here to slay the Tri-sonic.”
The governor was shocked.
"How did you know about the Tri-sonic?" he demanded.
She told him she had seen its footprints. The governor gave her the mission. She went back to her bench and ate a biscuit.
Then she went to the map maker and asked him to make a map of the way to the Tri-sonic’s cave. When it was done she gave him her ten gold coins and left. She followed the map and seen there was a big dragon guarding her path. She pulled out her sword and threatened to slay the dragon if he didn't move.
The dragon was a nice dragon so he moved and said, "I will let you ride me over the mountain if you take this metal chain off my neck.  "So she took her sword and started to cut the chain. Her sword broke. They were almost through with cutting the chain.
So she took her shield and slammed it on the chain. The chain broke but so did her shield. She took the rope and tied it around the dragon’s neck so she could hold on. The dragon flew fast and swift. Soon they were at the cave. There was a hyena guarding the cave. The dragon flew away in fright.
But Elizabeth took her last biscuit and threw it to the hyena. While the hyena was eating the biscuit, she slunk around him and went into the cave. There stood the Tri-sonic. She took out her daggers and flung them towards the Tri-sonic. She missed!
The Tri-sonic slung a breath of fire towards her. She dodged and went towards the Tri-sonic. She stuck a dagger on both of his sides until they met in the middle of his heart. Blood dripped down his sides. He lay there cold and stiff for he was dead.
She showed the governor the next day. The whole town met in the middle of town square to see who their strong knight was and to watch the knight receive the reward (a pair of gold daggers). When she took off her helmet, the whole town was shocked to see their brave knight was the wonderfully rich Elizabeth. When she received her reward she gave it to the poor people, for she was already rich and had the greatest treasure in the world -- her happiness.
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Comments 23
Fajr Omair Awesome Fajr Omair
Mar 5th 2017
manail Plzzz approve my stories its been ages! Manail
Oct 9th 2016
manail Dear admin I've sent many stories and poems but none of them are on my page my last story here was in 2011 and its 2016 now, please approve them this a request Manail
Oct 7th 2016
Anam Grat story liza!!!!!! Anam
Nov 23rd 2013
Momina Wafa wats got into to you you used to be nice and comment good stuff and say sorry if u commented something mean!!!!! Great story wafa i cant belive u r on my friend list Momina
Oct 28th 2012
Jun 8th 2012
tazeen Fantastic...Outstanding>>>>>>>> Tazeen
Apr 21st 2012
Aliza Awesome Aliza
Oct 21st 2011
Aliza Nyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyc Aliza
Oct 21st 2011
Bareera Nyyyyyc Bareera
Aug 30th 2011
Zainab Its awfully nyccccc!! :D Zainab
Aug 8th 2011
Aliza Wafa! i donot think its awful story. its amazing , everybody liked it. Aliza
Jul 21st 2011
Wafa Awful! Wafa
Jul 20th 2011
Arsal Habib AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GLARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LIZA THE GIRL Arsal Habib
Jul 15th 2011
sahar Awsome dear its very nice Sahar
Jul 9th 2011
manail Hey liza! thanks a lot. my nick name is also liza. so similar, Manail
Jul 9th 2011
Liza Nice story Liza
Jul 8th 2011
armeen Welxs!! Armeen
Jul 8th 2011
manail Comment on my story plzzzzzzzzz......................! Manail
Jul 7th 2011
manail Thank you! Manail
Jul 5th 2011
armeen! Armeen
Jul 4th 2011
Itachi Nyc story i like it. where do u live Itachi
Jul 3rd 2011
manail You are a great story writer.marvoulous. very good. Manail
Jul 2nd 2011

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