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Ashhar Amir
Ashhar Amir
Kenz International School
A Long Journey On Road
Published On Feb 23rd 2016
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September 2015
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Long and long i went, straight and straight
On a road without any turns or any gate
It is a straight long road
Very long but not very broad
The time passes but the road doesn’t ends
Because it is a straight road without any turns or bends
And me, I am just going straight and straight
In my old rusty car without any mate
Goes the petrol to end, And to my amazement there on the road is a bend
I turned there and found a petrol pump and a shop for car tyre mend
But my pockets were empty except an apple which was rotting
And I remembered of some money in my coat
Which i forgot in the boat when I went boating
And I woke up to find myself in a shopping mall
And that was a dream after all...
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Comments 11
Wania Your welcome!☺ Wania
Oct 28th 2016
 
 
manail Thumbs up! Manail
Oct 14th 2016
 
 
Ashhar Thanks everyone for nice comments Ashhar
Sep 27th 2016
 
 
Wafa Amazing poem Wafa
Sep 10th 2016
 
 
Khansa Good Effort. Khansa
Aug 21st 2016
 
 
Areeba Very Nice M'ashAllah Areeba
Aug 8th 2016
 
 
Ashhar Thanks Everyone Ashhar
Jul 27th 2016
 
 
Best laiba VERY GOOD Best Laiba
Jun 9th 2016
 
 
Wania Awesome and congratulations Wania
Jun 6th 2016
 
 
Shehroz Wow!!!!!! asshar nice poem Shehroz
May 29th 2016
 
 
Admin Nice poem Admin
May 8th 2016
 
 

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