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Haniya Farhan
Haniya Farhan
Fazaia Inter College, Air Headquarters, Islamabad
My Imaginary World
Published On Feb 14th 2016
Total Comments : 28
Total Views :  1792
14 People Like this!

September 2015

Rank 8 Out of 10
My imaginary world
lovely world ,my imaginary world
has peace and friendship all over i heard
has children sweet laughter and sweet singing bird
love all around an i heard
it has yummy chocolate fountains and houses made of sweet
if you are a good boy or girl it gives anything you want to eat
it is your choice of what you what
can ask for anything you want
you can get frocks or shirts and also pant
also your own band
with fresh fruit and vegetables gardens and which you can get off by your own hands
everything there is eatable even grass an land
it is my wonderland
just like a movie 'Charlie and the chocolate factory'
i think that’s all for now
see you next time bye bye.
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Comments 28
Beenish Nice poem! Has some grammar mistakes but they can be fixed. Cheers and congratulations! Beenish
May 25th 2017
Sofia Nice.😄 Sofia
May 12th 2017
Ahmed I like your poem alot.Great Ahmed
Mar 15th 2017
Alishba junaid Ahemadani AMAZING Alishba Junaid Ahemadani
Mar 13th 2017
Abdurehman Nice Abdurehman
Feb 11th 2017
Shayan My heart goes out to the families whose loved ones were lost. May Allah make it easy. Let's say Fatiha for all and sp Junaid Jamshed RIP. Inna lillahi wa inna ilayhi raji'un. Shayan
Dec 7th 2016
Aimon Nice I like it allot Aimon
Dec 4th 2016
Jungkook's You HAVE GRAMMER MISTAKES! Jungkook's
Sep 29th 2016
Jungkook's Not good, and not bad, it's just OK. Jungkook's
Sep 26th 2016
Wafa Love it congrats Haniya Wafa
Sep 10th 2016
Abia Has some grammar mistakes... other wise awesome poem sweetie! Abia
Sep 10th 2016
hamda And Hania the poem was SUPERB.....keep it up Hamda
Sep 9th 2016
hamda Can anyone tell me please, that were is the option to write "Dear Editor"..?please Hamda
Sep 2nd 2016
Khansa You have created an awesome image of your imaginary world in reader's mind and thats one of the good quality of a poet :) Khansa
Aug 21st 2016
Zoopash Awesome it's great Zoopash
Jul 26th 2016
Zoopash Wow it's great Zoopash
Jul 15th 2016
wania You poem is fantastic plz read my poem also you are a poet Wania
Jun 22nd 2016
Amna Congrats! You are a poem expert!!!!!!!! Amna
Jun 15th 2016
 laiba Nice ; good ; better ; best ; excellent ; awesome ; wonderful ; amazing ; fantastic ; aaaaaaaastonishing HANIA DEAR! Laiba
Jun 8th 2016
Berha Yeah, it's pretty good. I think you could improve this but great work, really great work Berha
Jun 6th 2016
Wania Congratulations Haniya and your welcome. Wania
Jun 6th 2016
Eesha Great work haniya didn't know you were capable of doing this Eesha
Jun 4th 2016
Haniya THANKYOU Haniya
Jun 3rd 2016
fatima Good Fatima
May 14th 2016
zoha Just ok Zoha
May 8th 2016
mathilda Awesome one Mathilda
May 6th 2016
Maryam I didnt like it so much though Maryam
May 3rd 2016
Wania Very good....awesome...amazing.....great Wania
Mar 26th 2016

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