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Abdullah Ahmed  Azizi
Abdullah Ahmed Azizi
P.i.s. Jeddah English Section
The Selfish Boy
Published On Mar 7th 2016
Total Comments : 19
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One little boy named Moiz was very selfish, always wanted to play with others toys and never shared his toys. His parents always kept saying to share his toys but he refused. One rainy night Moiz had a good dream and suddenly it became a nightmare. He was in his house and is parents were ghosts, he got scared and he praised Allah and said to Him"I want my parent to be in their bodies"!His parents said to him to share with others and don’t be selfish. Moiz woke up and saw that his parents were in their bodies. He thanked Allah and he stared to share with others.  
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Comments 19
Syeda Khadija Mistakes are proofs that you are trying first try was good Syeda Khadija
Nov 13th 2016
 
 
ifsah Oh dont worry u can write an even better one...continue writing.. Ifsah
Nov 6th 2016
 
 
Asbaat Ali LOLz good.. Asbaat Ali
Sep 25th 2016
 
 
Wafa I totally agree with Noorish well done Wafa
Sep 10th 2016
 
 
arsalan Good story Arsalan
Sep 10th 2016
 
 
Noorish UH.. Abdullah try using a bit higher level words when writing stories that attracts people. Your story is a bit short and the reader doesn't get attracted but by the way it was your first try so well done Noorish
Sep 2nd 2016
 
 
Abdul Rehman Try writing stories with a unique innovation. By the way, Well Try Abdul Rehman
Aug 3rd 2016
 
 
Musfira Guys it was his first try and it was good dont be so offensive nobody is perfect be positive Musfira
Jul 22nd 2016
 
 
mahrukh Agree with hadia Mahrukh
Jul 9th 2016
 
 
Hadia This story dont carry a mean. This is a rubbish how could THEY BECOME GHOST try again for more scary Hadia
Jun 28th 2016
 
 
Wania Try harder. Wania
Jun 12th 2016
 
 
Admin Very lil story Admin
Apr 19th 2016
 
 
Irza Gud Irza
Apr 6th 2016
 
 
hassan Nice story i love it i gave a like Hassan
Mar 28th 2016
 
 
hassan Nice story i love it i gave a like Hassan
Mar 28th 2016
 
 
duaa BY THE WAY MOIZ WAS LIKE GIAN IN DORAEMON :D WELL GOOD JOB Duaa
Mar 22nd 2016
 
 
Abdullah Ahmed Sorry my first story is lame a little bit Abdullah Ahmed
Mar 21st 2016
 
 
Aliza  Aamir Seriously Aliza Aamir
Mar 18th 2016
 
 
Berha It is started not stared Berha
Mar 17th 2016
 
 

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