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Ateeb Ahmed
Ateeb Ahmed
St.paul English High School
A Walk In Autumn
Published On Jun 25th 2011
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It was a peaceful afternoon. I had nothing to do so I decided to take a walk in the fields.
Walking through the fields I saw leaves shining brilliantly under the sunlight and making the ground beautiful. The trees were also shone of the golden colour, emitting golden rays in their surroundings. They stood their looking naked as if they had nothing to wear.
As I walked, I could hear the rustling of leaves under my foot as i stamped on them. Colorful birds such as the robins, parakeets stood singing on the trees. The squirrels were heard quarrelling for the nuts.
As the sun went down, cold breezes began to blow. I could feel them coming down on me making me feel crisp. Even though I was wearing a sweater I could not stop feeling cold. I looked up towards the gleaming orange sky; I saw birds going back to their nest. I knew that it was time for me to go home too.
I started for home eventually enjoying the beautiful sight of the sky. As I neared my house I could smell the fresh baking of apple pie, being made my mother, and making me feel hungry and wonderful. At the same time, my father called out to me asking me to go inside for dinner. As happy as I was, I enjoyed the walk a lot.
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Comments 7
Soha Nice try Soha
Dec 1st 2012
Soha Nice try Soha
Dec 1st 2012
Fatima Agreed(to Wafa) Fatima
Aug 12th 2012
Wafa Booooooooooring. Wafa
Jul 18th 2011
manail Gud Manail
Jul 9th 2011
Fatima Keep it up ! Fatima
Jul 6th 2011
Muhammad Nice effort, please. Muhammad
Jun 26th 2011

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