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Nayab Fatima
Nayab Fatima
Fatimiyah Girls School
My True Story
Published On Jan 19th 2016
Total Comments : 23
Total Views :  780
4 People Like this!


Rank 7 Out of 10
My true story is that one day i was reading V SHINE then I ended the book then i turn tje book so there was a add that   says REGISTER on  V SHINE and make your page and win gift so i registered and now publishing a story  I know it’s boring and short hope they will select it
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Comments 23
hafsa VERY NICE!!!! Hafsa
Dec 21st 2017
hafsa Shut up! Aleesha don't post comments like that, you just bully people! and Aden learn some speaking manners! Hafsa
Jul 30th 2017
hafsa Nayab aapi it's me (Hafsa) again. I hope you will accept my request Hafsa
Jul 30th 2017
hafsa Dear Nayab,(aapi) my name is Hafsa (fatima) I study in grade 4.Just ignore these comments that bully you.And if you feel angry by reading these comments that are written above,then don't loose your patience. I think that your story that you have written is true.Yeah that's Ok that your story has some grammer mistakes,but I hope that your mistakes will be corrected soon.I am sorry if you mind, and can I be your friend Nayab aapi? Hafsa
Jul 30th 2017
Urooj You study in 9th class and using this language . 😥 Urooj
Jul 8th 2017
Urooj Nayab think twice before you speak😥 Urooj
Jul 8th 2017
Aiza It is not even a story,it's totally lame. Aiza
Dec 6th 2016
Jungkook's Wow! Nayab, you've got to be kidding me! You're in Grade: 9, but look at your grammer! Lol! Jungkook's
Nov 3rd 2016
Wania Vania! I think that you shouldn't write these kind of stuff over here. There was nothing soo much wrong but please don't get mad at me beacause I was just giving an advice for you Wania
Sep 26th 2016
Jungkook's 😭Sorry if I was mean/rude, I apologise😭 Jungkook's
Aug 18th 2016
Jungkook's And how will they select your stupid 4 lined paragraph? Try to make a real story. Jungkook's
Aug 2nd 2016
Jul 22nd 2016
Vania Excuse me who ever wrote that baqwas message not even a story is really crazy bla,bla Vania
Jun 28th 2016
Fizza Nayab its not even a story !! its a boring reality thing !!sorry but nothing excitinggggg !!!!! Fizza
Jun 26th 2016
Jungkook's Boring!Thats just a four lined paragraph,and Nayab no need to be so rude! Jungkook's
Jun 12th 2016
Wania Okaaaayyyyy Wania
Jun 3rd 2016
Admin Thats what??/ Admin
Apr 19th 2016
Aden Shut up Manahil and Nayab Aden
Mar 28th 2016
subhana Boorrring what type of story is this Subhana
Mar 24th 2016
Manahil Aden, It's exciting not exiting Manahil
Feb 10th 2016
nayab Write your own comment dont under estimmate others you fools Nayab
Feb 6th 2016
Saqifa Yeah, 4 lined- story,.............then real. Means Not with your own minded. Saqifa
Jan 29th 2016
Aden Has nothing exiting but hope you don't mind my comment Aden
Jan 23rd 2016

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