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Aden Seerat
Aden Seerat
Bloomfield Hall School
Something In The Room
Published On Sep 3rd 2015
Total Comments : 6
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I followed them inside. There is something in my room! Shouted the girl. A noise from the balcony came.The girl stepped back.The teacher went forward to see something.All of a sudden,a thief appeared and pushed the teacher.I breathed in horror as I had seen this before.The teacher fell from the balcony.A maid ran into the room.She was the girl who pulled me into the pond.The thief killed her too.The little girl went under her bed.The thief circled the bed.He pulled the girl.
To be continued
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Comments 6
Aden I dont like getting left out of a conversation Aden
Feb 16th 2016
Irza HAHAHA tnx alot Sajal Irza
Nov 5th 2015
Wania Sorry I didn't saw that it will be continued Wania
Oct 18th 2015
Sajal Irza... THUMBS UP!! Sajal
Oct 3rd 2015
Irza YEA SAME AND U NEED TO ADD MORE DISCRIPTION AND SPEECH MARKS."There is something in my room!" thats how its supposed to be Irza
Sep 28th 2015
Wania Gud but the story is short Wania
Sep 27th 2015

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