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Emaan Farhan
Emaan Farhan
Nakhlah Girls Campus
The Pirates
Published On Sep 3rd 2015
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Many years ago, pirates used to sail the sea on their ship. They defeated all their enemies and were very inpatient and arrogant. One day the ghost pirates found a bottle with a map in the sea. When they heard about the treasure, they quickly hurried and followed the map. When they reached there, they found the treasure in the bag. They put their hands on the treasure and realized that it was a trick. All the treasure was fake. Then after being so impatient to get the treasure they realized there are much more important things to do.
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Comments 4
maryam Good job my cousin emaan farhan Maryam
Oct 25th 2015
 
 
Wania Nice but try to write a story that is not short enough a little bit longer would help Wania
Oct 18th 2015
 
 
Amna Great Amna
Sep 27th 2015
 
 
Irza NICE BUT....ITS NOT REALLY A STORY IS IT? IT'S VERY SHORT.... Irza
Sep 27th 2015
 
 

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