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Hadia Amir
Hadia Amir
National Model School; Sheikhupura
The Coin
Published On Sep 3rd 2015
Total Comments : 12
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Once upon a time there lived a Cat, a Deer and the son of the Deer.
They all lived very happily. One day Deer's mother gave a coin her son.
The Deer's son and the Deer went to the Forest suddenly the coin of Deer’s son disappeared. The Deer started crying loudly.
The Cat woke up and she drank her milk.
After that she went down to her home. She was walking and she found a coin she thought to keep the coin in her pocket but she thought that Allah is watching every one.
She started walking and suddenly she heard a loud crying voice.
She again started walking when she reached near the deer she said (why are you crying friend).
The Deer said my son's coin has disappeared so he was crying the Cat smiled and said “it’s ok do not be upset”.
Is that your coin the baby Deer laughed and the cat gave the coin to Deer.
Deer and cat now both are the friends and now they all lived happily....
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Comments 12
Hadia Hello Hadia
Aug 14th 2016
Hadia Thank u soo much i will be careful next time Hadia
Aug 2nd 2016
Fizza Hadia wo aap ko aapki ghalti bata rahi hai to use samjho everyones learning even in my stories mujhe koi keh de to mai agli baar se uska khayal rakhoon gi . tum us se sekho chahe tum kitni bhi bari ho jao tum seekhti raho gi aur dosroon ko sikhati raho gi .us se jhagra na karo!! and nyc story !! ;) Fizza
Jun 27th 2016
Wania Yaaar...irza was just suggesting u ...when we see a mistake we try to correct it Wania
Mar 26th 2016
Hadia AOA Hadia
Mar 8th 2016
Zainab Nice story and irza should not be so over confident Zainab
Feb 14th 2016
Hadia Irza don't be over confident Thanks Hadia
Jan 10th 2016
Hadia Irza aap koon hoti ho jo muje ye batao k mein apni grammar theek karoon Hadia
Jan 8th 2016
Wania Are you happy with my comments Please be my friend I don't have any plzzzzz Wania
Sep 27th 2015
Wania Nice story Wania
Sep 27th 2015
Irza ACHA ACHA!! it is a nice story but plz improve grammer..tnx Irza
Sep 27th 2015
Hadia Yaar like krdo comment kr do Hadia
Sep 26th 2015

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