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Armeen Zahra
Armeen Zahra
Beaconhouse School System
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Published On Jun 18th 2011
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June 2011
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Faria was very happy with her outstanding result but brother Nehaal who did not got a good result was very unhappy. Faria went in the living room where Nehaal was sitting and told him that i have got better result than you and she started to tease him and just then their father, Mr Rahim entered the room. He was not so happy because Nehaal did not get good result, he just passed by passing marks. Mr Rahim shouted at Faria and scolded her because she teased Nehaal. He said" No matter next year my son will get better grades than you and then he will tease you , your victory is just nothing. What do you have to do, you are a girl,OK and he is a boy !! Mr Rahim just took Faria out of the room telling him about his admission in a cricket academy. Mr Rahim was a person with old thoughts. He always thought that girls were worthless and boys were the ones given the most value, it was their family thought infact, that was why Aunt Hira did not studied but that time was different but now every girl studies so Faria was. It was not like he did not love Faria but he just not gave value to him in front of Nehaal. Hira was crestfallen and she started crying when her mother just came and wiped off her tears, she was totally not like her husband. Faria thought having a position and top marks in the whole school will make her father proud of himself for having a daughter but she was wrong. Later in night Faria's mother told Mr Rahim about how Faria was crying and crestfallen with your behavior and then he realized that he had said too much. That night Mr Rahim went into Faria's bedroom and apologized to her of the bad behavior in the day. Faria had a big heart and she said that nothing happens baba as long as you love me I’ll be right. As time passed away Mr Rahim thought more about having a son who can put the house's load on himself and more and more Nehaal became comforted and on the other side Faria became more successful, getting positions and having the top rank throughout the school. She worked really hard and she always kept advising Nehaal to study and do something, but he was never into studying. Faria was amongst the highest achievers in O and A levels throughout Pakistan and got a scholarship and Nehaal almost failed. Now for the first time Mr Rahim realized that having a daughter was not bad but he still insisted his son to do further studies. Nehaal went America for studying more and Faria did CA in Pakistan. It was 5 years now and Nehaal had not been back to Pakistan though he was in contact. Nehaal told Mr Rahim one day that he has got a job in an American bank and he has decided to marry a girl in America.  Mr Rahim insisted Nehaal to come back to Pakistan and then marry but he never listened in fact after few months he stopped sending money from America . Faria was married a year ago and she had none of her in laws except her father in law and both her husband and father in law were very sweet and nice. Now Nehaal never picked up the phone until one day his wife received the phone and said that his son will never come to Pakistan. The moment Mr Rahim heard this he got a heart attack. The son who he loved a lot and thought would be everything to him in his old days just left him. Faria the CEO of a bank, always cared about her parents even they cared about her or not. She rushed when she heard about her father , all the treatment of Mr Rahim was done by Faria , no Faria was not treating him , I mean at Faria's expenditure. Mr Rahim realized that a daughter is also a gift from god when he saw his daughter so worried about him and this as well that daughters and sons are all equal and we should never compare them. Faria took both of her parents to her house.
 
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Comments 32
Marwa :P Marwa
Aug 11th 2013
 
 
Emaan Nice Emaan
Aug 13th 2012
 
 
Syed Zohan Hoooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING Syed Zohan
Nov 14th 2011
 
 
Bint waseem TREMENDOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bint Waseem
Sep 22nd 2011
 
 
Maria Wow! nice story Maria
Aug 7th 2011
 
 
raiha Gud job!!!!!!!!!Armeen "baji" Raiha
Jul 29th 2011
 
 
urooj Brilliant story!!!!!!!! i must say out standing n i will be waiting for another best story=) thanx!!!!!!! Urooj
Jul 24th 2011
 
 
Salwa Congrats Salwa
Jul 15th 2011
 
 
Mahnoor Very touching story. NICE!!!!!! WONDERFUL!!!!!!!! Mahnoor
Jul 10th 2011
 
 
armeen Thanxx to all of ya Armeen
Jul 9th 2011
 
 
Nur Nice story :) Nur
Jul 7th 2011
 
 
Zernab Wonderful STORY! CONGRATS!! Zernab
Jul 6th 2011
 
 
Zernab Wonderful! CONGRATS!! Zernab
Jul 6th 2011
 
 
Liza It was a nice story!!!!!!!!!and congratulations Liza
Jul 6th 2011
 
 
Mehwish A really fabulous story !!!! u deserved this success and congrats for ur success u hav the ability to be a gr8 writer !!!! gr8 work!!!! =) Mehwish
Jul 6th 2011
 
 
armeen Welll thanxx n congratxx Salwa!! Armeen
Jul 4th 2011
 
 
Itachi NYC STORY!!!I LOVED IT!!! Itachi
Jul 3rd 2011
 
 
 яυмαιsα Nice story! яυмαιsα
Jul 2nd 2011
 
 
armeen Thanxx Armeen
Jul 2nd 2011
 
 
Ahmed Congrats Ahmed
Jul 1st 2011
 
 
Salwa Armeen it is now the situation of majority.... Salwa
Jul 1st 2011
 
 
Salwa Nice story.....love it Salwa
Jul 1st 2011
 
 
Salwa Nice story.....love it Salwa
Jul 1st 2011
 
 
Maria Wow! very nice Maria
Jul 1st 2011
 
 
Maria Wow! very nice Maria
Jul 1st 2011
 
 
Maria Nice Maria
Jul 1st 2011
 
 
Omama Wow!love it Omama
Jun 26th 2011
 
 
armeen Thanxx zahra...actually dis is what is happening dese days Armeen
Jun 24th 2011
 
 
Shahmir Nice story! Shahmir
Jun 24th 2011
 
 
Zahra The moral is fascinating. U showed the importance of daughters quite beautifully. Zahra
Jun 21st 2011
 
 
armeen Thanxx Armeen
Jun 21st 2011
 
 
Aisha Nice story. I love it. Aisha
Jun 20th 2011
 
 

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