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Beenish Saeed
Beenish Saeed
Lahore Grammar School
Tom Did Hard Work
Published On Aug 4th 2015
Total Comments : 14
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A small boy named Tom lived with his parents in a cold and snowy village. Tom's parents did not have a job. "Dad! Let's go and find you a job," said Tom. His father was drinking tea near the fire. Tom went out to do fishing but he forgot that the river was frozen. It started to rain. Tom ran all the way home but he got wet. Somebody knocked the door. Tom checked the door. "Hello! If you have no job boy then come to Papa Joe’s restaurant," said the man. Tom closed the door and discussed this with his father. "I want this job," said Tom. Tom joined Papa Joe’s restaurant. He went to the restaurant every day. Years and years passed and Tom grew 20 years old. He became manager of the restaurant. He got rich. He took his parents to Indonesia and they lived with him happily.
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Comments 14
Wania People I just want to tell you that if I decline your friend requests don't be dishearted. I am confused with your names whether you are a boy or a girl. I only accept girls friends requests not boys. Wania
Sep 26th 2016
yashfeen Your story is very nice and it is published in magazine .keep it up Yashfeen
Aug 11th 2016
Anaya Izra you post on everything and you are overconfident in your self....control Anaya
Aug 5th 2016
Wania Welcome Wania
Apr 2nd 2016
Beenish Thank you all for commenting and liking my work. Beenish
Dec 15th 2015
Shayan Superb!!!! Shayan
Nov 20th 2015
Wania Good but it could be more detailed Wania
Sep 22nd 2015
dua Good Dua
Aug 23rd 2015
misha It's a very nice story Misha
Aug 16th 2015
Aleena I believe that your story is something that's really good! A creative mind! Aleena
Aug 16th 2015
Sarah This sure is good but it's short. It could have been much longer and more interesting. Sarah
Aug 11th 2015
Irza It's great but just remember to not leave out the important parts like how he got it when he got it was he happy with the job.u know things to make it interesting!!! Irza
Aug 10th 2015
Anusha It is good but it should have been a bit longer Anusha
Aug 7th 2015
amna Your story should have been a bit long and detailed. but it is good Amna
Aug 5th 2015

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