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Asjal Rashidi
Asjal Rashidi
Beaconhouse School System
Published On Jun 30th 2015
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March 2015

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On the day of Eid there sat a boy in his room, Hamid. His parents had passed away and he lived with his grandmother. She allowed him to go to the prayer ground (eidgaah), so he along with his friends went there. After prayer his friends sat on rides, ate sweets and bought toys while Hamid who did not have enough money just stood there watching. On the way back, he saw a kitchen utensils shop so he bought a kitchen tong (chimta). His friends made fun of him, but the thought of his grandmother burning her fingers while making roti made him stronger. All his friends broke their toys one by one but Hamid's tong was very useful and helped his grandmother a lot.
An Urdu story by : Munshi Premchand
Translated by : Asjal Rashidi
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Comments 21
Wania Welcome!! Wania
Sep 26th 2016
Wania Congratulations!!! Wania
Sep 23rd 2016
yashfeen Nice but next time try to write yourself Yashfeen
Aug 19th 2016
Asjal Dua I don't know about the course book, but I read this story from n a book and decided to translate it. As far as cheating is concerned I have cited the acknowledged the author at the end and have mentioned about the translation. Asjal
Apr 19th 2016
Asjal Thank you everyone Asjal
Apr 19th 2016
dua You have cheated this story from the oxford course book of grade 7 Dua
Oct 3rd 2015
Sarah Short but awesome. It has a great moral Sarah
Oct 1st 2015
Sarah Short but awesome. It has a great moral Sarah
Oct 1st 2015
Wania Awesome Wania
Sep 22nd 2015
Rihab Its too good Rihab
Aug 18th 2015
Beenish Did you receive any gift? Beenish
Jul 31st 2015
sakifa NYC story Sakifa
Jul 26th 2015
Abdullah Loved it Abdullah
Jul 25th 2015
dua Good story and has a very nice moral Dua
Jul 25th 2015
Maryam Is this a real story? Maryam
Jul 21st 2015
Anusha Nice story :) Anusha
Jul 17th 2015
deco Had some profound meaning ! Deco
Jul 14th 2015
amna :') Amna
Jul 13th 2015
Jul 13th 2015
Dania Very beautiful story Dania
Jul 3rd 2015
Misha Nice story Misha
Jun 30th 2015

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