Once there lived a boy named Simon. He was 7 years old. He just wished that he could invent something new! So he went into the garage and saw something.....it was broken car pieces! An idea came in his mind and it was that he could make a car a car of his own style! And luckily it was moms birthday tomorrow so he would give the car as a gift to his mom. Off he started making the car and finished it within a day then a thought came in his mind if he would give the car to mom..........dad would say `Car for mom not for Dad `Then he began to look for car pieces but he did not find any car pieces then he saw a car a BMW! And it was blue but Simon thought Dad doesn't like blue he likes red so Simon broke the BMW EXPENSIVE car! And then he began to make another car and he finished it within 21 hours! But the car that he made was worst than the BMW! Then he painted the BMW red (As it was his father's favourite color). Then the next day Simon brought both his mom and dad blindfolded to the garage. And when he removed the cloth from their eyes mother saw a car and hugged Simon for building them and Dad saw the car which was made for him and fainted . After sometime Dad woke up and asked Simon how he made these cars. Simon said the car for mother is made from the car pieces I found in the garage and the car for father is made from the pieces of BMW I broke the BMW into pieces and made this car and Dad you don't even like blue so I made you a red car! Dads face was red and he said that you broke my BMW! It was on rent it was not my! How can you break my BMW without my permission the men are coming to take my BMW what will I say to them! Simon can you make a BMW again? Of course Simon could so he started his work but he asked his father to give him a picture of BMW . Dad give him the picture and Simon started his work at last he completed his work! And the men of rent a car came sat in the BMW and CRASH! It broke into pieces Simon said `Opps ! I forgot to put the glue !` Dads face was red. One of the men of the rent a car said `Sir! Pay £1000 for the damage of the car!`Dad paid the money that was demanded and then when the men of rent a car went he went to Simon and said` you are grounded for the whole week!` And from that day onward Simon never thought of inventing any thing!!
No problem irza I wrote the ending like that becaz look when his parents scold him for breaking the BMW and making that ordinary car so he decided to stop his work!
Sep 3rd 2015
V.nice story Misha,the only thing I disagree with is that you ended the story in a negative way.next time be clear with what your moral is.SOO SORRY FOR SAYING IT I KNOW IT DOESN'T FEEL GOOD SO 1NCE AGAIN SORRY B4 U START FIGHTING