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Nabiha Tariq
Nabiha Tariq
Sls Montessori And High School Islamabad
The Evil Queen Of Fairyland (part 1)
Published On Jun 28th 2015
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Once there was a fairy called adoira. She was very beautiful. She was born with skin as white as snow and pink wings as glittery and shiny as stars. As she was 10 her mother passed away. From then his father took care of him and as she was 12 his father passed away as well. One day three small fairies whose wings were made of lower came to adoira. Adoira asked that from where they had come from. They said that we have come from  flowergard. A place that looks like a flower garden but is a home for us. Adoira had many friends but one of them was jealous from adoira because of hes beauty. Her name was juzet. adoira always thought that they both would have great friendship but juzet was aware of that , she hated adora so much that she made adoira her servant and as well as those three flower fairies ; not in dreams but in reality. She used those flower fairies to give her dresses a sparkle and adora would do all of her house work. She wouldn’t give a single penny to adora because she was greedy. The secret behind this all was because adoira was the princess of Fairyland and by making adoira her servant so she could know all the secrets of the palace and so she could rule Fairyland. This is not all but juzet was a wicked witch. She transformed herself into a fairy so she could not be captured by the guards. One night adoira escaped her home and went back to the palace . The flower fairies were asleep so she carried them in her small pouch. She flew back to the castle leaving a glittery path behind. 
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Nabiha PART 3:- **At the day of the party** The guard caught Juzet in her new form and brought her to the main hall of the castle. Even if Juzet wanted to she couldnt escape and now Adoira had became the queen and Sofia remained as princess. Adoira asked Juzet "Juzet, were friends why would you do that to me?". Juzet replied "Shut up! we were never friends! I always wanted your place and ill not leave you so easily!". Sofia used her power on Juzet which held her tightly and her wings died..... Juzet now had became a fairy without wings. Adoira said "Please calm down, i know the truth, why dont you join us? Help us rule this kingdom and make it a better place!". Juzet was crying and she replied "What, really? even after all i did to you..... you will still let me take part with you, I am so sorry Adoira!". Adoira smiled and used her powers and gave Juzet new wings. After some months had passed, Adoira got married and the kingdom became a better place. Adoira refused of giving Juzet punishment for her cruel acts, Indeed it shows Adoira was a kind hearted girl, soft spoken, polite and brave. **Moral**:- Becoming each others enemies wont help with life, instead becoming each others friends and helping each other out will give you a good result at the end of life. Nabiha
Jun 14th 2017
Nabiha Thnx shayan and everybody else I am finding a new idea to complete the story and yeah R.I.P Junaid Jamshed may his soul rest in peace Ameen Nabiha
Dec 14th 2016
Shayan My heart goes out to the families whose loved ones were lost. May Allah make it easy. Let's say Fatiha for all and sp Junaid Jamshed RIP. Inna lillahi wa inna ilayhi raji'un. Shayan
Dec 7th 2016
Wania This is really a good idea that we should post our stories on the comment box below because Admin is not posting anything. Great idea!! Wania
Sep 26th 2016
Wania This is a good idea......we should post our stuff on a comment box because vshine is not apploading our stuff at all. By the way good job!! Wania
Sep 23rd 2016
Nabiha Thanks a lot for ur applauses everyone Nabiha
May 15th 2016
Nabiha In the next part adoira will be found fainted outside the door of the castle but when juzet find out that adoira has escaped she will fly around the kindom but she couldn't find adoira. at the castle the guards fond fainted and brought her inside. Adoiras little sister found out that she was too weak . Sophia left her sister lying on the bed. after some time the flower fairies woke up and saw adoira fainted in her palace room . the flower fairies gad a magical healing power that they used on adoira . after being healed adoira woke up and found her self in her palace room. she was very happy. Sophia saw adoira awake and gave her a nice hug because she missed adoira a lot. her sister organized a party the next day to celebrate in which the whole kingdom could enjoy. but juzet didn't gave up she saw the posters and now se changed her self into a guard so she could get to adoira easily . Sophia saw juzet and told the guards about her. she told them that if u find a guard looking similar to one of u and trying to get into the castle stop that guard, instead bring that guard to the main hall of the palace. TO BE CONTINIUED.............. Nabiha
Apr 10th 2016
Shayan Nyc!! Shayan
Nov 20th 2015
Fatima Well done Fatima
Oct 1st 2015
Wania Waiting for the next part Wania
Sep 22nd 2015
Nabiha I have published it, it will be there soon Nabiha
Sep 10th 2015
mariyam Nice one Mariyam
Aug 13th 2015
sakifa I like it! soooooooooooooooooooooooo much! Sakifa
Aug 4th 2015
miss Cool story Miss
Jul 24th 2015
Misha I am 12 years old and thanks Misha
Jul 16th 2015
Fajr Omair Next story Fajr Omair
Jul 14th 2015
Fatima So good story I can,t wait to read the next part please publish it soon Fatima
Jul 1st 2015
Misha Yes! What will happen next? Misha
Jun 29th 2015
Maha What happen next??? Maha
Jun 28th 2015

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