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Beenish Saeed
Beenish Saeed
Lahore Grammar School
The Greatest Night
Published On Jun 27th 2015
Total Comments : 14
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March 2015

Rank 9 Out of 10
There was a small village near a large developed city. A boy named Jack lived in the village his parents were tailors and they had a shop near the river bank. The village was not very populated some people succeeded in their business and shifted to the city. The villagers had a problem they only had one forest but workers that worked in the city came cut down the trees. The villagers were running out of wood and if they had no wood how would they make a new house and improve the village. The boy's parents also needed to renovate their shop and without that forest that village would lose its beauty. The boy was going to the river for fishing he saw his parents standing by his shop and their whole shop was nothing but wood logs. "What happened?" asked Jack. Jack rushed home he wrote a letter to the minister of the city telling him about the forest. The minister to the village he promised them that that he would not take away their forest. This was Jack's greatest night. His parents reconstructed their shop and the minister told them that they can shift in the city. But the villagers loved their village most.
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Comments 14
Wania Your welcome and congratulations Wania
Mar 30th 2016
Beenish Thank you all for commenting and appreciating my work. Beenish
Dec 15th 2015
Wania Nice Wania
Sep 22nd 2015
Misha Nicee Misha
Aug 20th 2015
Beenish It had to be got, I am sorry. Beenish
Aug 2nd 2015
ayesha I liked your storys. Ayesha
Jul 31st 2015
Beenish My story pot published in the magazine Beenish
Jul 29th 2015
amna Ohhh Amna
Jul 18th 2015
Beenish It takes time to receive gifts I will get them someday. Beenish
Jul 16th 2015
amna Then y u r winner? Amna
Jul 15th 2015
Beenish I did not receive any gift Beenish
Jul 15th 2015
amna Wht gifts u recieved? Amna
Jul 14th 2015
Beenish The minister came to the village Beenish
Jun 28th 2015
Rihab Hmm.gud story Rihab
Jun 28th 2015

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