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Samir Mustafa
Samir Mustafa
Wisdomhouse School
Queen Of Ofa Part 3 (last Part)
Published On Jun 25th 2015
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He was again in that cave and he found the Yogi Baba.Yogi Baba was also very shocked when he saw Chris with Anne,The Girl and The Old Man.”Oh!So you are back!Now go live your life.”Said Yogi Baba.Chris walked out of the cave.As he was walking out of the cave they saw a bear which was drinking water from the lake.He picked up the old man in his hands and started to run from the bear.The bear heard their footsteps and started to chase them.Finally the forest was ending so the bear decided not to follow them.Chris just put his hand on a tree to rest but a slithering snake was finding it’s food.As the snake saw Chris hand it bit on Chris hand and dropped dead on the spot.Anne was shocked to see Chris dead and couldn’t believe her eyes that what she just saw.Anne decided to go to the city all by herself because it is very near.Anne started to run.She ran and ranand finally reached to the palace.The king and queen were very happy to see their daughter back.Anne told his parents the whole story.Anne’s parents were shocked to hear the whole story.When Anne told the king that Chris is dead so he became very unhappy.He said to his servants to find out that do any of his relatives live in this country or city.The servants found out that Chris wife lives in this city.The kings sent his servants to bring her to the palace.The servants brought her to the palace.The king said”I am very unhappy to hear this news””What kind of news my lord?”asked Lorraine.”Chris is dead!!!”said the king.”What?”said Lorraine and fainted on the floor.The king sent her to one of his royal rooms.She rested there one day.After one day the king went to her room and told her the whole story which Anne told him.”I promised Chris that I will make him the king of my palace after me if he will find my daughter,but now Chris is dead so I want you to be my next queen of the palace.Said King.Lorraine didn’t know what to be,to be happy because she is going to be the next queen of the palace or to be sad because Chris is dead.She decided to be happy and to take revenge from the king of his husband’s death.She asked to the king that can she live 2 to 3 days in the palace because she liked the palace and wants to spend her time in the palace.The king allowed her to live in the palace.She didn’t want to live in the palace or spend her time she wanted to take revenge because she had got a nasty trick in his mind.On that day she got some poison of the black python from her special servant and mixed it in the royal dinner.At the dinner time the king sent his servant to bring Lorraine downstairs to eat dinner.The servant went to her room to call her.the servant said”King is calling you downstairs to eat dinner””Oh!I am not feeling well please tell the king that I am not feeling well and please bring my food in my room”Said Lorraine.The king permitted her to eat dinner in her room.The royal family was dead after eating two bites of the food.On the other hand Lorraine threw her food in the dustbin.She knew that nothing will come to her all the things will come to the cook and king’s special servant.Then Lorraine became the next queen of the palace and got the special servant and cook killed.Many years passed like this but king’s brother whose name was Ken somehow who was the king of nearby country called Parca somehow found out that Lorraine has killed his brother so he became very angry and decided to go attack on OFA and kill Lorraine.He attacked on OFA and easily killed many servants and guards.Lorraine could hear the thumping of horses.Lorraine decided to run from the gate which was secretly fixed in the palace.She got out of the palace from the back gate and started to run.After running 5 minutes she stopped and noticed that it is a very weird place because all the trees are very big here and there was also a lake between those big trees.As Lorraine moved she saw a horse lying on the floor and there was a chit beside it.She picked up the chit,opened it and read it out”Please give this horse some water or else it will die.”She immediately got some water in her boot from the lake.She put it in front of the horse.The horse drank it and was fully refreshed.Suddenly there was a big sparkle and a fairy was standing beside the horse.She said”You know what?Tomorrow is your appointment with death.You had an appointment with death when you would have been very old.But now you have killed the royal family so death has come to get you.If you don’t want to die tomorrow so go and save the other two lives.You killed three people that’s why you have to save three people’s lives.You have saved one now go and save the other two.As Lorraine moved on she saw a man hanging on a tree with a rope.She asked him”Why are you hanging on this tree with a rope?””I want to die because I don’t have food to eat and I don’t have money to buy food.”said the Man.Lorraine gave her money to the man.”By the way from where will you buy food?.”Asked Lorraine.I will buy it from my cruel uncle he only sells it to me.”said the man.Lorraine moved on as she moved on she saw a puma lying on the floor it had a screw in his leg.It was hurting him very much the blood had bled so much that is was just going to die.Lorraine immediately got the screw out of his leg and gave him some water the puma’s life was savewd and puma was feeling better.Suddenly the fairy appeared again with a sparkle.She said to Lorraine”Yipeeee!You have saved three lives,Now go and live your life happily and you will be the queen of the palace.”With a sparkle the fairy sent Lorraine on her royal bed.From that day Lorraine decided not to take revenge from anyone and behave goodly to everyone. 
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Comments 7
Wania You could make it more interesting Wania
Sep 22nd 2015
 
 
amna It's fine anyways. Amna
Jun 27th 2015
 
 
amna The story should have ended on part 2, i mean this third part is also nice but.............. Amna
Jun 27th 2015
 
 
amna The story should have ended on part 2, i mean this third part is also nice but.............. Amna
Jun 27th 2015
 
 
Samir I wrote it Yesterday!And the plot of revenge is not typical everything is connecting to every part of this story!!! Samir
Jun 26th 2015
 
 
MARYAM Good one but you cud have make it more interesting... good anyways... Maryam
Jun 25th 2015
 
 
shehram This goodly in the end doesnt make any sense , the story is nice though but then its sort of a typical plot of revenge and then nature's revenge something sort of like that. May I plz know when did you send this story for approval ?? Shehram
Jun 25th 2015
 
 

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