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Ayan Fatima
Ayan Fatima
Beaconhouse Johar Town Senior Girls
Wanna Eat A Pizza!!!
Published On Jun 25th 2015
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Make a Pizza mummy,
 For my tummy,
 It should very very yummy...
Bake a thick crest,
Cause it's the best...
Don't be late,
And bring my plate
Add so many spices and toppings to make it delicious,
I wanna eat it I am so ambitious
Why the oven is so lazy...
And now I'm going crazy,
Oh! The pizza is here,
Thanks mom for baking it somehow,
I can't tell how much I'm happy now...
Thanks mom... I LOVE YOU!!!
My Favourite Delicious PIZZA!
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Comments 7
Berha Well i think there is something missing but v.v.v.v.v good Berha
Apr 22nd 2016
 
 
Irza Well how u can improve it is to make sense Irza
Jul 31st 2015
 
 
Maha Awesomeeeeeeeeee Maha
Jul 27th 2015
 
 
duaa Nice Duaa
Jul 26th 2015
 
 
Wania Gud try Try your best Wania
Jul 15th 2015
 
 
Ayan Thanks for telling Irza. How can I improve myself??? Ayan
Jul 14th 2015
 
 
Irza GOOD TRY BUT NEEDS TO IMPROVE! Irza
Jul 13th 2015
 
 

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