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Amna Ali
Amna Ali
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My Lovely Sister
Published On Jun 25th 2015
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My lovely sister
i have a sister
she is lovely
she likes mango
looks like a tango
she is fair
but a glare
she is pretty
but not greedy
i like her
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Comments 45
amna Yeah Amna
Oct 23rd 2016
 
 
Wania My talent! Wania
Sep 22nd 2016
 
 
amna Yup! Amna
Jun 27th 2016
 
 
Wania Hahahahahahaaaaa!😂😂😂 Wania
Jun 6th 2016
 
 
amna And i am thinking that how u read all the comments! Amna
May 23rd 2016
 
 
Wania After reading your comments i think vshine should have a chat box Wania
Mar 29th 2016
 
 
amna Hello Amna
Feb 19th 2016
 
 
amna Hello Amna
Feb 19th 2016
 
 
amna ???????????? Amna
Aug 30th 2015
 
 
amna Where r u all? maha hw was ur result? wht was the %? Amna
Aug 2nd 2015
 
 
Maha Yep i was in the competition dont be sorryy Maha
Aug 2nd 2015
 
 
amna So only 2 days left yarr maha and zoya Amna
Aug 2nd 2015
 
 
amna Ok maha but i thought tht u went in tht poetry competetion so i thought sorry if u didnt.. Amna
Aug 1st 2015
 
 
Maha Amna u r rite and by the way who told u that my poem was selected and i have uploaded one and i will try to upload the one which was selected Maha
Jul 31st 2015
 
 
zoya Abba yar lary band karo theek hai amna is sal dekh tey hain or 50 50 kar ley tey hein.and yes i dont know whether is she an old user or not Zoya
Jul 31st 2015
 
 
amna And one more thing tht giving u an example tht when our school result comes it is not tht it just comes of the 1st session it comes of the whole year ..... so plz sports result also comes like tht.................... hahaahahah Amna
Jul 31st 2015
 
 
amna Yup zoya maha is rite bcuz dont say a single word to jaguars the mighty jaguars am i rite maha ? bcuz jaguars are the winners from 2 years so panthers cant defeat jaguars and tht means tht jaguars are the winners.. dont count just one year count the 3 years and then calculate the final result this is hw jaguars are leading... hahahahaahhahahhaha mahwisal am i again rite??? Amna
Jul 31st 2015
 
 
amna Mahwisal post your poems as well bcuz u will be better than us and u can get prize as u have been selected in the poetry in class 6 Amna
Jul 31st 2015
 
 
amna Ok mahvisal hw was ur result? zoya have u taken the course and uniform? Amna
Jul 30th 2015
 
 
Maha I answered i am mahwisal Maha
Jul 30th 2015
 
 
amna Maha? answer plz Amna
Jul 30th 2015
 
 
Maha Amna u r right and zoya i am from 7 class and plz dont say anything openly to jagaurs i also know how u r team won?? Maha
Jul 30th 2015
 
 
zoya Maha in which class do u read? and thnx for sending me the friend request.and u are from jaguars mmeans the losers of the year+the jealousers .iam from panthers. Zoya
Jul 29th 2015
 
 
amna Tell ur real name .. r u mahwisal? Amna
Jul 29th 2015
 
 
Maha I know u and I know u r from mighty jaguars and I am too Maha
Jul 28th 2015
 
 
Maha Yea i know u and u know me too Maha
Jul 28th 2015
 
 
amna Do u knw me maha? Amna
Jul 28th 2015
 
 
amna Maha who r u? Amna
Jul 28th 2015
 
 
Maha So u talking about tehreem right Maha
Jul 27th 2015
 
 
amna Thnx Amna
Jul 24th 2015
 
 
Mahrukh Nice Mahrukh
Jul 22nd 2015
 
 
amna Yup Amna
Jul 20th 2015
 
 
Irza Aww thats nice have u shown it to your sister yet.she must be thrilled to hear it? Irza
Jul 18th 2015
 
 
amna Thnx Amna
Jul 15th 2015
 
 
Wania Nice Wania
Jul 15th 2015
 
 
amna Welcomezzzz Amna
Jul 15th 2015
 
 
amna Thnx Amna
Jul 14th 2015
 
 
amna Very nice 1 .... allawwww Amna
Jul 13th 2015
 
 
amna I thought u r a great person and only a clear minded + kind person Amna
Jul 12th 2015
 
 
amna Zoya u said me cheater and i will not be angry do u think so? Amna
Jul 12th 2015
 
 
zoya Please do try my riddles and you now wht i see a gr8 change in you Zoya
Jul 12th 2015
 
 
zoya Dont get angry okay ,at least not a cheater like you Zoya
Jul 12th 2015
 
 
amna Better than u :) Amna
Jul 11th 2015
 
 
zoya Just fine Zoya
Jul 11th 2015
 
 
amna It is made by me Amna
Jul 4th 2015
 
 

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