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Beenish Saeed
Beenish Saeed
Lahore Grammar School
The Family Tree
Published On Jun 25th 2015
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Elaine was writing bad about her family in her diary! "I have such a weird family they are so weird," said Elaine. Elaine closed her diary and went to sleep. When Elaine woke up she saw an elf sitting beside her bed! "Hello! My name is Lippy the elf," said Lippy. Elaine rubbed her eyes and even pinched herself. "I am here to tell you that stop thinking bad about your family," said Lippy. Elaine nodded her head and torn the pages in which she wrote bad about her family.
Moral: Never write or think bad about your family you will have to pay the price.
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Comments 18
Wania Yoir welcome!! Wania
Sep 23rd 2016
 
 
Fatima The moral is good Fatima
Apr 8th 2016
 
 
Beenish I will take all of your suggestions to make my new stories more interesting. Thank you once again for commenting and suggesting. Beenish
Dec 15th 2015
 
 
Wania I am not hating it ......... i am only advising her to make it more interesting Wania
Dec 6th 2015
 
 
Beenish Says what? Beenish
Aug 1st 2015
 
 
Beenish Says what? Beenish
Aug 1st 2015
 
 
mahrukh Good but it doesn't make any sense about the elf why does he say that? Mahrukh
Jul 28th 2015
 
 
Fajr Omair Do not hate it. it is not nice to make fun of others. Fajr Omair
Jul 14th 2015
 
 
Wania You can improve your story Wania
Jul 13th 2015
 
 
Sarah It is nice but if you started with telling us more about Elaine the story could have been better. I like it. Sarah
Jul 13th 2015
 
 
amna Sure you can Beenish, just try harder. Amna
Jun 30th 2015
 
 
amna Sure you can Beenish, just try harder. Amna
Jun 30th 2015
 
 
Beenish I think I can write better stories Beenish
Jun 27th 2015
 
 
Beenish I am telling the other children that you will have to pay the price which means you will get in trouble even if in a good way or bad. Beenish
Jun 27th 2015
 
 
amna how did she pay the price?? it can be improved. Amna
Jun 26th 2015
 
 
Samir How did she pay a price?Very bad story I didn't like it!!! Samir
Jun 26th 2015
 
 
Beenish It is very short Beenish
Jun 25th 2015
 
 
Beenish It is very short Beenish
Jun 25th 2015
 
 

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