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Aima Laraib
Aima Laraib
Pakturk International Schools And Colleges
I Can Never Forget That Day
Published On Jun 25th 2015
Total Comments : 9
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One day, my all family was sitting together including my cousins and friends and made a plan for Camping in the forest. Everyone agreed and we set out for forest on Saturday Morning.We made a camp there and at night all of us went for collecting wood sticks for Bonfire. While collecting the sticks, one of my cousin lost. We tried our best to find her but, we can’t find her. But when we return back to the Campsite she was already there and we laughed a lot. After we did the bonfire and ate our dinner. After that we went to sleep but we decided that after regular intervals of time some members will awake for our protection.  My cousin lost there that's why this was the day that I never forget.
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Comments 9
Best laiba STORY is GOOOD! but NEEED more IMPROVMENT Best Laiba
May 27th 2016
Irza My dear Aima,the story is good.... but I think you really need more practice.... Irza
Oct 28th 2015
Wania Yes,i do agree with sarah Wania
Oct 6th 2015
Aleena I agree with Sarah, I know WE THINK that we have done PH.D's in English -.- but those who need help should be encouraged! We shouldn't just laugh 'em out! Probably Shehram was a bit rude with Aima Aleena
Aug 16th 2015
amna I'm sorry that i said like that but seriously you can make it better. Amna
Aug 7th 2015
Sarah Guys, we shouldn't say stuff like this to anyone. It is true that some of the tenses are wrong and it's a bit short but we should try to encourage instead of criticize. Sarah
Jul 13th 2015
amna It is nice, but you can make it much better Amna
Jun 30th 2015
amna Yes shehram is right, the tenses are wrong and ......... OMG! Amna
Jun 26th 2015
shehram Real ehh????? OMG you from Pakturk , and is this the sort of story a 6th grader should write ??? i mean the tenses are wrong , the story is too short a little description could help , btw you from Pakturk girls branch near Shaukat Khanum?? Shehram
Jun 25th 2015

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