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Yumna Mujeeb
Yumna Mujeeb
Saniis
The King Of Books
Published On May 25th 2015
Total Comments : 67
Total Views :  840
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November 2014
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Rank 8 Out of 10
Once there was a boy who never cares for his books. he always tears its pages and even throw them out.the boy thought that no one else him know about this habit,but the king of books watchs him day and night.one day when the boy was out the king of books sent down his fairies to take his books. when the boy returned he was shocked that where is his books. he searched a lot but then started crying. then suddenly he heard chimes, the king of books came down and give him his books the boy was shocked. the king told the boy to take care of his books,otherwise the king will burn his books.....
moral: please take care of your books            
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Comments 67
Beenish Yumna, it is not nice to call somebody "pendu." It does not matter where she lives and do not boast about you living in Najran. I also live in Lahore. Does that mean I am "pendu" too? Beenish
Sep 11th 2016
 
 
aiza Yumna plz accept my friend request Aiza
Aug 23rd 2016
 
 
sajahir Please accept my freind request Sajahir
Aug 23rd 2016
 
 
sajahir Shehram you are saying this all to yumna and if anyone write on your story or riddle how would u like????????????????????????????? Sajahir
Aug 19th 2016
 
 
yashfeen Hi yumna please accept my friend request Yashfeen
Aug 11th 2016
 
 
aiza Its not so bad but yumna you need improvement ,anyway the story is nice Aiza
Aug 8th 2016
 
 
aiza ADMIN i sent my things on MY PAGE but none of them are posted yet why aren't they.Plz reply me soon Aiza
Aug 8th 2016
 
 
pretty ADMIN i want ask you that i have written my things on MY PAGE but they are not posted i thought near a year ago what's the problem??????????????????????????????????????? i am waiting for your reply :) Pretty
Jul 28th 2016
 
 
pretty Nice keep it up i like it :) Pretty
Jul 26th 2016
 
 
Wafa Great story and congrats Wafa
Jun 25th 2016
 
 
Aleesha I really like your picture. Aleesha
Jun 12th 2016
 
 
Aleesha Hi Yumna,congradulations for the prize.Please add me,special thanks. Aleesha
Jun 12th 2016
 
 
yumna No i did not get the gift Yumna
Jun 12th 2016
 
 
Taibah Pls add me Taibah
May 12th 2016
 
 
Saqifa Do you get the gift, Yumna? Saqifa
Nov 20th 2015
 
 
Saqifa Not too much nice Saqifa
Nov 20th 2015
 
 
Wania The story is very achi Wania
Nov 13th 2015
 
 
Aqsa KEEP IT UP!!!! :) Aqsa
Oct 24th 2015
 
 
yumna Well shehram i remembered what you said but my answer starts now you do not have an opinion to tell me whats right or wrong and the other thing is that u know that i am from najran yeah so u are from lahore right like penduu"tum jaise loog duniya mein nahin hoon to acha hi hai.pehle khud sekho phir dusron ko sekhao.....;)"hope you like your first class besti miss.......... wait for the next comment,story,winner and wait and see. Yumna
Oct 24th 2015
 
 
Nabiha Greatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt Nabiha
Oct 20th 2015
 
 
Saqifa Stop fighting! Saqifa
Sep 18th 2015
 
 
yumna I said sorry because my mother said do not quarrel with others in that manner always try to solve it and not to give it courage Yumna
Aug 21st 2015
 
 
Beenish You should stop the fight Yumna said sorry Beenish
Jul 30th 2015
 
 
Maryam Why did the boy cry for books,he used to tear them????????????? the moral is nice Maryam
Jul 26th 2015
 
 
Beenish I am with no one stories are stories Beenish
Jul 16th 2015
 
 
Wania You all started fighting Admin told you that they tell the winner by the story and their age Like a child in class 5 writes a story of only 7 lines so heis not declared as a winner a child in class 1 writes a story 7 lines should be declared as a winner. Hope you do not ignore my message Wania
Jul 13th 2015
 
 
Beenish First thing stories have to be bit interesting for the reader morals add or not nothing matters. I am not putting up a fight. Maybe Maybe Maybe Shehram is right but I do'nt know where but she is kind of right. Yumna should be encouraged. Shehram has the right to give feedback. I am with Shehram. Beenish
Jul 11th 2015
 
 
shehram And i am giving my opinion and i have a right to , you cant stop me and if anyome disagrees may tell its ok Shehram
Jul 7th 2015
 
 
shehram I am just opposing the winner part and i said to admin not to her if she minds i dont care but thats completely unfair you gotta agreee aand even if you dont truth remains the truth you can't change it so now use arguin bout it..... Shehram
Jul 7th 2015
 
 
amna And second thing,you're just discouraging Yumna. you could tell her that you can improve your mistakes in various ways,politely instead of pointing out her mistakes like some comments that say that this story doesn't deserve to be winner. we don't write stories so we can be winner. Amna
Jun 22nd 2015
 
 
amna Guys, stories being short or long doesn't matter. what matters most is that the story should have a good moral. Amna
Jun 22nd 2015
 
 
shehram Yea beenish you have to agree with me after all that was the truest truth hehe xD Shehram
Jun 22nd 2015
 
 
Beenish Do not worry I agree with you stories are stories they can be made verbally or by writing keep the creativity up. Beenish
Jun 22nd 2015
 
 
Beenish I am really sorry but I do have to agree with Shehram this time but the story is great Beenish
Jun 22nd 2015
 
 
Samir I agree with u guys Shehram and Bakhita this is story is too short and there are many many many grammar mistakes and the idea is not very good.It is very childish it is very unfair with the other writers if this story has won a prize.You should write some long stories like this:http://www.vshineworld.com/…/content/20226/board-exams-ghost and many other stories which are also very good. Samir
Jun 20th 2015
 
 
Hamna Keep it up , youngie . I love the story . I don't really love the story but I love your efforts . I know that one you'll be a great writer . (y)♡♡♡ Hamna
Jun 18th 2015
 
 
Shaheer Lol tewar bdl gaye :P aisa kya howa?? Shaheer
Jun 17th 2015
 
 
Maha Nice Maha
Jun 17th 2015
 
 
yumna Thank u guys for thoose comments and shehram i am really sorry for what i said Yumna
Jun 16th 2015
 
 
Beenish Well 5 stars from me to the story but I request you kindly to correct the grammar. Beenish
Jun 15th 2015
 
 
Shaheer GUd job! shehram.. known as frst class besti in our language :P Shaheer
Jun 15th 2015
 
 
Dania Yumna, you are a very talented writer. Dania
Jun 14th 2015
 
 
Beenish I loved your story there were some mistakes but the story meaning was great. Beenish
Jun 14th 2015
 
 
shehram And Yumna being a winner doesn't matter to me -_- what matters is..... well leave it your to small to understand :P Shehram
Jun 9th 2015
 
 
shehram By the way if i may ask .. you really from najran?? and where in najran? Shehram
Jun 9th 2015
 
 
shehram Actually i told you i am not saying cuz of that u get it ?? i dont wanna fight with you miss ... Shehram
Jun 9th 2015
 
 
yumna Actually you r not the winner shehram so you r saying like that ......hope u like my reply Yumna
Jun 8th 2015
 
 
shehram And besides comments are for giving your opinion .. can't i do that?? does it mean that you will start arguing with me because my opinion was different?? it wasn't wrong ... Shehram
Jun 8th 2015
 
 
shehram Well everyone after me ?? what i said wasn't wrong that you have to agree ... I don't say that don't declare short stories or stories with tenses winner .. what i am saying is to look towards the other stories as well ... nd its just me giving some feedback Shehram
Jun 8th 2015
 
 
shehram No one here is jealous .. jealous of nothing??? i am just telling the fact.. and thnx admin for considering my comment Shehram
Jun 8th 2015
 
 
yumna Thank you mama i love u Yumna
Jun 7th 2015
 
 
yumna Thank you mama i love u Yumna
Jun 7th 2015
 
 
fahima Wao keep it up yumna Mujeeb.these allz comments are bcs these allz are not winner that,s wy they are comments like that don,t worried this is a part of it .congratsssss :) Fahima
Jun 7th 2015
 
 
yumna THANK YOU GUYS FOR MAKING ME A WINNNER MAY ALLAH BLESS YOU ALL AND THOOSE WHO ARE JEALOSE WITH ME CANT SPOIL ANYTHING Yumna
Jun 7th 2015
 
 
ayesha It should declared to be the winner because its moral and respect for books is just so nice ...just superb..... for me!!!!!! Ayesha
Jun 5th 2015
 
 
Admin It doesnt mean older kids cant win...most of the time they are winners ...we are considering ur concerns and would let you know...thnx for comment....this is admin's account Admin
Jun 5th 2015
 
 
shehram Yea right and besides if i make a fake account and write the wrong age then ?? Shehram
Jun 5th 2015
 
 
mahrukh CONGRATULATIONS!!! Mahrukh
Jun 3rd 2015
 
 
sakifa BUT SIR THAT WOULD MEAN THAT IF SOMEBODY IS OLDER, THEY WILL HAVE NO CHANCE TO WIN? WOULDN'T IT BE LIKE UNJUST? Sakifa
Jun 3rd 2015
 
 
Admin This stuff is declared winner considering many factors ...for example little kids are also made winner according to their calibre ...so an ideal stuff isn't always announced winner......thnx for commenting al; Admin
Jun 3rd 2015
 
 
shehram Umair i do not mean any offense but it is not fair thats it .. i mean like this story is too small and i do not find any creativity, i will not like to say anything more but this all is not fair thats it and we have a right to say whats wrong and whats unfair... Shehram
Jun 2nd 2015
 
 
Bakhita Well said Shehram...The story is grammatically very wrong...Though it's not a disgrace or discouragement for the writer, but really it does not deserve to be the winner! Bakhita
Jun 1st 2015
 
 
Umair Shehram..... grammar is corrected normally while approving the stuff .... maybe this story got published as it is mistakenly..... and winners are decided on creativity and idea mostly....sentences and grammar are not preferred Umair
Jun 1st 2015
 
 
shehram Well admin ? i dont think this story should be declared the winner .... its so small and even the tenses are wrong ... Hate to say this , but i is unfair with the other writers.... Shehram
Jun 1st 2015
 
 
Admin Check the My Page winners here https://www.facebook.com/vshineworld Admin
May 29th 2015
 
 
amna It is nice and has a nice moral. Amna
May 28th 2015
 
 
MARYAM Liked it.. Maryam
May 27th 2015
 
 

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