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Syeda Tahira Iqbal
Syeda Tahira Iqbal
Ibn Seena English High School
Remember Your Manners
Published On Jun 13th 2011
Total Comments : 12
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Once there was an adorable boy namely known as harry but his real name was Harris. He was a young 10 year old boy who was very intelligent in studies and good at sports but he had one bad habit which was 'forgetting his manners’. Now this truthfully was bad. Now there was an old lady who would give him sweets. He would take it and give a warm smile and run away. now once this same incident happened but instead as soon as the boy got ready to run away she caught his hands and whispered something, and let go of his hands the boy chilled to the marrowbone and ran away crying but when he reached home and locked himself in his room. But when he did he felt the wind brushing his face and suddenly found himself in a room which was completely off white. it was so white that it was hurting Harry's eyes blinding him so he covered his eyes then when he opened his eyes he bumped into an old man, he went behind without saying sorry.... the man looked at him and then with his magical wand he made a fog on which a clear picture of Harry could be seen doing the same incident taking the sweets............. old lady holding his hands but then he saw that before the old lady held his hands the incident before this when he went he saw how bad the lady felt with a few teardrops. These drops went to his heart and understood what happened but still the old man who really was a magician. He told the boy that he is not going to leave him until he does not become manner full. With shivering body and clammy hands he begged the old man to take him back but he refused....., then suddenly he woke up he remembered when he had locked himself in the room he went to sleep he smiled and vowed again never to be unmannered again...........
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Comments 12
syeda tahira And for your kind info abdur rehamen i won for the story competition right here on vshine Syeda Tahira
Jul 20th 2012
areeba Tahira you have done a good job!Ignore Momina,Bareera,Abdur-rahman actually they don't know how to speak or write English they don't have sense of humor.I got 93/100 but even i liked it.I think Momina use to write lame stories or poem. Areeba
Jan 6th 2012
syeda tahira Also thnx every1 fr there lovely comments Syeda Tahira
Oct 13th 2011
syeda tahira Also thnx every1 fr there lovely comments Syeda Tahira
Oct 13th 2011
syeda tahira Listen for 1 thing i dont care what u all write and what do u all mean improve ur english are u all gods orsomething that u dont make spelling mistakes and momina are you a winner in stories cause everywhere u comment u write lame is that what they teach u in ur school sorry to be mean but pride does fall Syeda Tahira
Oct 13th 2011
Alyina You should improve your english Alyina
Oct 10th 2011
Bareera Exllnt job Bareera
Sep 22nd 2011
Bint waseem Gud work! Bint Waseem
Sep 6th 2011
Abdur-Rahman Good for people who aren't very good in literature(english I mean)For your own benifit i recommend that you improve your english before writing any story.Anyways good attempt and Eid mubarak Abdur-rahman
Aug 31st 2011
Omama Love it! Omama
Jun 26th 2011
Muhammad Good attempt, please. Muhammad
Jun 19th 2011
Momina LAME! Momina
Jun 15th 2011

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