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Fatima Tariq
Fatima Tariq
Central School System
The Strange Forest (part 2)
Published On Apr 23rd 2015
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I closed my eyes when I open my eyes,I saw Luna.What are you doing here? asked Luna.I told her that someone said me that lets go out.Now lets sleep said Luna.The next day Max,Luna and I were going at the middle of the forest.We saw a girl.Get out she said.You.....you are trying kill us right I said.I am not trying to kill you.I am trying to take you guys out said the girl.Why? asked Max.At every holiday me and my mom came to this forest father did not let me come over when the girl telling that what happen with her a man came.He is bad man! cried the girl.Some pushed me and I fell down.
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yashfeen Great Fatima its not bad Yashfeen
Aug 5th 2017
 
 
Fatima I thought you guys would encourge me! Give me advise to write better stories!!!!!! Fatima
May 23rd 2017
 
 
Fatima Please dont laugh!! It was mu story I ever wrote!! I didnt publish it bcz I knew everyone would laugh!! Then I thought I have very nice friends who would never laugh at me!! Fatima
May 23rd 2017
 
 
Fatima Please dont laugh!! It was mu story I ever wrote!! I didnt publish it bcz I knew everyone would laugh!! Then I thought I have very nice friends who would never laugh at me!! Fatima
May 23rd 2017
 
 
Fatima I dont Fatima
May 17th 2017
 
 
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Sep 22nd 2015
 
 
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Aug 28th 2015
 
 
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Jun 19th 2015
 
 
Aliza  Fatima plz help me i am all ALONE fighting abdullah i need backup............. Aliza
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Apr 26th 2015
 
 

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