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Midhat Abro
The City School
The Crime
Published On Apr 20th 2015
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Scene 1
It is a cold breezing night. Every building is dark and no light is switched on,except for the street lamps and a building with a board. On the board there is written"Police Department" In this building the police are working late. the chief police is sitting on his chair looking at files. A lady enters running.
Lady:(Shouting and thumping her hand on the table)Police!Help!Help!
Cheif police:(With an expression of amazement)Please calm down.How can I help you
Lady:My Phone & wallet has been robbed.
Cheif police:Hmmmmm,where and when was it robbed?
Lady:(Trying to remember) I.I.I.. in the M.M.M..market place almost an hour ago.
Cheif police:Did you saw that how the robber looked like.
Lady:(Thinking) Yeah.He was short and fat and had a scar on his cheek....his right cheek.
Cheif police:Can you help us make a sketch of him.
Lady:Sure....I will help.
Cheif police:Thank you.I hope we will find the robber soon.
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Comments 8
aiza You should have continued it Aiza
Sep 21st 2016
 
 
Wania More interesting if you continue it Wania
Sep 24th 2015
 
 
Fajr Omair It will be more interesting if you continued. Fajr Omair
Jul 19th 2015
 
 
Fajr Omair It will be more interesting if you continued. Fajr Omair
Jul 19th 2015
 
 
amna Is this it??!! it is good, but it will be more interesting if continued. Amna
May 20th 2015
 
 
MARYAM Yeah, kind of good but it can be improved with a bit more grammar skills. but good try! Maryam
Apr 23rd 2015
 
 
Fatima Have you written this yourself? It's nice Fatima
Apr 21st 2015
 
 
shehram I will like it if you continue this Shehram
Apr 21st 2015
 
 

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