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Fatima Tariq
Fatima Tariq
Bloomfield Hall School
A Trip To Island
Published On Apr 20th 2015
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It was out trip to a island when we reached our teacher said some kids will go to take food,some to take woods and some to take water.I went to take food with my friends Mark and Susan.We saw some fruits Mark climbed up  the tree and throw the fruits down but Mark saw a face of a ghost.Max fall down from the tree and his leg hurted.I asked Mark what happended.I saw a face of ghost said Mark.We took the fruits and went back.At the night I was in camp with Mark and Susan.Some one pulled Susan.Help! she cried we all ran after her.We saw a dead body.Susan was the other side of the lake.I crossed the lake with Mark.
To Be Continued
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Comments 4
Wania Spelling mistakes.........but pretty nice Wania
Nov 13th 2015
Rihab Its a gud story but there are spelling mistakes Rihab
Jun 24th 2015
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May 29th 2015
Fatima Please Comment Fatima
Apr 26th 2015

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