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Fatima Tariq
Fatima Tariq
Central School System
A Trip To Island
Published On Apr 20th 2015
Total Comments : 8
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Rank 7 Out of 10
It was out trip to a island when we reached our teacher said some kids will go to take food,some to take woods and some to take water.I went to take food with my friends Mark and Susan.We saw some fruits Mark climbed up  the tree and throw the fruits down but Mark saw a face of a ghost.Max fall down from the tree and his leg hurted.I asked Mark what happended.I saw a face of ghost said Mark.We took the fruits and went back.At the night I was in camp with Mark and Susan.Some one pulled Susan.Help! she cried we all ran after her.We saw a dead body.Susan was the other side of the lake.I crossed the lake with Mark.
To Be Continued
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Comments 8
Fatima Guys I have left bcz that time I was 7 and was afraid that if I publisb nxt parts everyone would make my fun like on my stort the the forest!!!! And Fatima
Jun 3rd 2017
Ayesha Great, need to practice Direct speech. " and ". Ayesha
May 14th 2017
Fatima I don't really think it was nice Fatima
May 12th 2017
maria Nice story hmm.. I like it but too short and you did not say the name of the protagonist Maria
Apr 18th 2017
Wania Spelling mistakes.........but pretty nice Wania
Nov 13th 2015
Rihab Its a gud story but there are spelling mistakes Rihab
Jun 24th 2015
Admin Check the My Page winners here Admin
May 29th 2015
Fatima Please Comment Fatima
Apr 26th 2015

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