A long time ago a game was made in which you have to kill a ghost and escape the haunted house. After a few years the game station opened and that game costs 450 dollars. Many people died and 2 or 3 people escaped the haunted house. Drake and Josh were over excited to play this game so they paid and started to play. To be continued
This is a nice story,but it is too short. maybe if you write a longer story people will like it much better. this is a very good topic you have chosen to write. and i encourage you to write the next part. please write it soon.