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Aliza  Aamir Siddiqui
Aliza Aamir Siddiqui
Smart School
Someone In My Room (part 2)
Published On Mar 23rd 2015
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February 2015
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Izma faintes, after 15 minutes she woke up and saw at the wall of her room.There was "Dead" with blood. Izma felt scary but thought that someone is playing a prank with her. In fact Izma was a brave Girl and did not believe in super natural things or evil spirits. She went to her closet, changed her clothes and went to her art class........ She was so stupid that she did not share it with her teacher.
When  again night came ,she went to her her bed ...........She felt a bit uneasy and felt someone is watching..............She gasped and looked at the old clock.She felt sparking eyes inside the clock.She hoped from the bed and opened the clock chamber ,she screamed there was the head of her Teddy bear and there was a chit hanging ,she opened the chit ,It wrotes................
You are NEXT!
Now, Izma start believing that there is really someone in room..................She sat on her bed ......and after few minutes she heard a  lulaby the girl with white gown and long hair was singing :
Tick Tock Tick Tock
Life is Short ,
Ready to be murdered,
Be ready to be killed,
Tick Tock Tick Tock
Life is Short.
The girl suddenly disappeared. Izma startled and she covered herself with a blaket and siad herself ....It is a bed dream........................She suddenly heard the voice of Tick Tock from the clock again and voice is increasing slowly...................................
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Comments 18
pretty GOOD ONE Pretty
Sep 28th 2016
 
 
yashal Nice story aliza!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yashal
Feb 28th 2016
 
 
yashal Wow scary!!!!! Yashal
Feb 28th 2016
 
 
Aliza  Aamir Thnx for commenting Aliza Aamir
Oct 28th 2015
 
 
Wania Good one Wania
Sep 24th 2015
 
 
Aliza  Aamir Thnx Aliza Aamir
Aug 28th 2015
 
 
jasmine Cool but lots of spelling mistakes Jasmine
Jul 28th 2015
 
 
zoya Exellent Zoya
Jul 12th 2015
 
 
Dania Nice story Dania
Jun 19th 2015
 
 
amna Congrats!! Amna
May 30th 2015
 
 
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May 29th 2015
 
 
Aliza  Aamir Yes but you have to wait........... Aliza Aamir
May 9th 2015
 
 
Fatima That's okay, after all we all make mistakes :) Any new stories from you? Fatima
May 5th 2015
 
 
Aliza  Aamir Sorry some times i am out of my senses Aliza Aamir
May 5th 2015
 
 
Fatima Your comment on SAmir Mustafa's story "Mirror Mirror" was really rude :/ Fatima
May 4th 2015
 
 
Aliza  Aamir Thank you arbish for the advice there is always a room for improvement Aliza Aamir
Apr 27th 2015
 
 
Arbish U should hv i write full story :( Arbish
Apr 26th 2015
 
 
Fatima Aliza you have write that it was a bed dream.Anyway ice story Fatima
Apr 22nd 2015
 
 

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