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Maikham Adil
Maikham Adil
Karachi Public School
The Mystery
Published On Mar 19th 2015
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February 2015

Rank 8 Out of 10
Tip,tip,tip. It was the only sound I could hear sitting in my room in front of the window. It was the sound of rain. Yes, that cooling, refreshing thing which fills one's heart with delight and excitement whenever it arrives.
It was Sunday and therefore a holiday. M parents and siblings were not at home as they had to go to the hospital to meet my uncle who had a road accident. They were supposed to return at 11 pm that day. I stayed at home as I had to complete my English and Science Assignments. I quickly completed my work. It was then 5 pm. I sat near the window enjoying the rain.
While looking out of my window, I saw a car parked a few yards away from my house. You may think it is an ordinary thing-a car parked on the road but it was not. I could see clearly that in the car just beside the back seat 2 guns were kept. As my room was on the first floor I could see the weird weapons but the people around could not. I thought that the car must be of thieves.
After a few seconds I was rushing downstairs boldly. It seemed that that a new sort of energy diffused in my body. Grabbing my raincoat I rushed out of my house. Few minutes later, I was standing just beside the mysterious car. No one was there in the car. The people were walking here and there, unaware of the dangerous car on the road. I glanced around. Then I tried to open the back gate of the car. To my astonishment, the gate was not locked. I opened the gate, reluctantly went inside the car, closing the gate quietly behind me.
I was about to touch the guns at the side of the back seat. Suddenly I saw a man rushing towards th car. I hid behind the seat. The man, unaware of my presence, opened the front gate of the car, sat on the driving seat and started the car. I was scared. Where he was going? Who is he? Probably a thief? How could I escape?
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Comments 21
yashfeen Fabulouse story.I think you are going to be a great writer someday. Yashfeen
Apr 7th 2017
Aiza Good one Aiza
Apr 7th 2017
yashal A good one!!!!! Yashal
Jan 21st 2016
Irza OH god!!!sooo sorry everyone my keyboard is broken I meant lovely Irza
Nov 9th 2015
Nov 5th 2015
Wania Congratulations Wania
Sep 24th 2015
Noor Fatima Amazing..!! (y) waiting for the next part..;) Noor Fatima
Sep 14th 2015
Maikham Iam girl for heaven's sake shaheer not a boy... Secondly i think your brain needs a special repair. Can't you recognize from my name that iam a girl...? Rubbish.... Maikham
Jul 26th 2015
Dania Actualy, its not scary just lot of suspicion Dania
Jun 19th 2015
Dania That is sooo scary Dania
Jun 19th 2015
Shaheer Btw khan was saying he to you! U grl or boy? Shaheer
Jun 17th 2015
shehram Well admin? it shows that i commented on 22nd april on this story however the publishing date of this story is may 29th ehh? i dont understand a single thingy Shehram
Jun 1st 2015
Shaheer Gud Shaheer
Jun 1st 2015
Shaheer Gud Shaheer
Jun 1st 2015
Admin Check the My Page winners here Admin
May 29th 2015
Nabeela Amazing Nabeela
May 26th 2015
Maikham Thanks everyone.......i'll publish (part 2) will be more exciting and adventurous then this one...... Maikham
May 13th 2015
Rihab Amna some stories can be cliffhangers! Rihab
May 12th 2015
amna Nice but what happens next? don't leave the story uncomplete like this!! i hope you'll write the next part soon.i can't hold my horses to read it!! :) Amna
Apr 27th 2015
Arbish Good job :) Arbish
Apr 26th 2015
shehram Nice Shehram
Apr 22nd 2015

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