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Aliza Aamir
The City School
Someone In My Room 1
Published On Mar 17th 2015
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Izma was new in hostel. “Where is my room"? She asked from the reception. The receptionist gave her the key of room 143. On her first night she heard wolf howl and saw a shadow weeping there was an axe inside her shoulder as like someone had killed her with an axe. Suddenly the shadow came close to her and disappeared.


                        To be continued................

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Comments 18
Zainab This part is too small. but great Zainab
Mar 5th 2018
laiba Doesn't matter ideas just pass from person to person Laiba
Mar 19th 2017
HAFSA NICE starting keep it up my FRIEND BEST OF LUCK Hafsa
Sep 28th 2016
Aliza  My sis is so dead she was using my id and wrote that comment :( Aliza
Apr 2nd 2016
Wania Lolzzzz Wania
Sep 24th 2015
Aliza  Thnx Aliza
Aug 28th 2015
Shaheer LoL.. O_o -_* Shaheer
Jun 16th 2015
Aliza  WOW ALIZA i like how you write stories . It is an honour to be your friend Aliza
Jun 13th 2015
Princess LOL Princess
Jun 5th 2015
Shaheer Lol Shaheer
Jun 1st 2015
Shaheer Lol Shaheer
Jun 1st 2015
Aliza  Hey guys Aden didn't meant it Aliza
May 30th 2015
Aden I just said whats in my mind!Is that a crime? Aden
May 28th 2015
Arbish Oppss sorry i didn't look to your other parts :) Arbish
Apr 26th 2015
Tooba Hey Aden, I've seen loads of stories with these startings. Tooba
Apr 21st 2015
amna We should always adopt good things and ignore bad things Amna
Apr 13th 2015
Aliza  This is my idea .But what should i do when mine and yours ideas are same. + sorry if it broke your feelings +i am new here. Aliza
Mar 21st 2015
Aden Starting is a cheat from my story something in my room Aden
Mar 21st 2015

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