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Mishaal Shaikh
Mishaal Shaikh
I Tried To Take A Selfie
Published On Mar 18th 2015
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I tried to take a selfie
When l was all alone
I never should had done it because
It broke my mobile phone
I guess I'm not so pretty
I thought that l was cuter
I snapped one with my laptop
And busted the computer
I broke my father’s camera
My mother’s iPad too
This shouldn’t be so difficult
I don’t know what to do
At last l got a selfie
Perhaps the worst one yet
I posted it online today 
I broke the internet
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Comments 12
Aleesha Wonderful! But, don't you think it should be in the poem's area? Aleesha
Sep 30th 2016
 
 
Wania Pretty nice Wania
Sep 24th 2015
 
 
Wafa Love it Wafa
Sep 11th 2015
 
 
Irza Wow! u made it up urself? Irza
Jul 13th 2015
 
 
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May 29th 2015
 
 
Rihab Wow good poem Rihab
May 18th 2015
 
 
amna Nice Amna
Apr 13th 2015
 
 
Fatima Nice Fatima
Apr 11th 2015
 
 
ayesha True jasmine but nicely done!!. Ayesha
Apr 9th 2015
 
 
Samir Good! Mishaal keep it up.But this should be in the poems column.You can write more poems. Samir
Mar 31st 2015
 
 
Fatima Amazingly written. Fatima
Mar 23rd 2015
 
 
jasmine Nice but should be in poems Jasmine
Mar 19th 2015
 
 

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