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Fatima Tariq
Fatima Tariq
Central School System
Haunted House (part 4 ) Last Part
Published On Feb 18th 2015
Total Comments : 7
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Please don’t kill my friends said Emma. Never ever said the girl. The girl throw knife on Emma leg. Emma! shouted Bella. Emma was dead. Bella we must get out said Max. Something pulled Max in the store room.Help! he cried. The of the store room was locked. Max opens the door! shouted Bella. The door opened. Bella saw Max dead body. She saw the girl also. Please don’t kill me said Bella. You will be dead said the girl. And the girl killed Bella. Who ever came in the house he never came back.
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Comments 7
Fatima Thanks guys...I was 7 that time and I had no sense of horror Fatima
Aug 11th 2017
Fiza Great job but there are also some spelling mistakes by the way REALLY great story. Fiza
Jul 26th 2017
Aiza It's good Aiza
Jul 25th 2017
fatima I liked it really much Fatima
Apr 8th 2015
Manahil NYC! Keep writing Manahil
Mar 22nd 2015
aeman You could've made it a bit better ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ Aeman
Feb 25th 2015
Fatima Please comment Fatima
Feb 21st 2015

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