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Aden Seerat
Aden Seerat
Bloomfield Hall School
Something In In The Room 3
Published On Feb 7th 2015
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Who are you? I asked. I am lily. I live in this hostel near your room she said. You mean next room, but I thought it was empty I told. No, I have been living there since I was eight she said in a scary tune. I want you to come to my room at mid night she said. Before I could react she ran. I heard a noise from the pond. I stood near it and put my hand in the water. Suddenly a hand from the water pulled me inside. I saw that a girl was pulling me. She will kill you!! She screamed.
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Comments 6
Fatima Aureen why are you not coming to school? Fatima
Apr 10th 2015
aureen Really nice aden. please publish the next part. thxxxxxxxxxxxx.:) Aureen
Apr 9th 2015
Tooba Gud1 Tooba
Feb 23rd 2015
Ayesha Thanks for inviting. Ayesha
Feb 19th 2015
jasmine Not scary i like it Jasmine
Feb 11th 2015
Fatima Next part please it is scary Fatima
Feb 8th 2015

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