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Aden Seerat
Aden Seerat
Bloomfield Hall School
Lia My Mermaid Friend
Published On Jan 30th 2015
Total Comments : 12
Total Views :  914
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It was my first day at a new school. We had gone in a field near a lake. All kids were playing except me because I had no friends. I was sitting the grass feeling lonely. Suddenly I heard a noise from the lake. I ran to see what happened. When I looked the water I saw a girl who was injured. I thought that I should help her myself. When I pulled her out of the water I noticed that instead of legs the girl had a tail. I thought I was dreaming. The girl awoke from all the noise. When she saw me she screamed and jumped into the water. Don’t be afraid I told her gently. Who are you? She asked. I am Aden, I replied. I am princess Lia she told and cried with pain. You can hide in the bus but It would be easy if you had legs. She held the amulet and wished for legs. All of a sudden her tail changed into legs. I quickly hid her in the bus and took her in my room. We are lucky because mom is not here I told her. Now you can tell me your story princess Lia of water and today at morning while I was playing I got here she said. The next day I took her to the river and she went home. As my reward she gave me her necklace.
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Comments 12
yashfeen Great Aden that's a really nice story. Yashfeen
Aug 12th 2017
Aden Thank u everyone!!! Aden
Jun 2nd 2017
Aiza Well your story is like an episode of Sofia the first,"the floating palace" but you changed it a lot so nice one Aiza
Dec 30th 2016
Minahil Nice story but make it suspense! Minahil
Mar 28th 2016
Aden Thank you all!Your cheerful comments are lovely and an inspiration for me! Aden
Jul 23rd 2015
Fatima Well Aden you are having great ideas to write a story Fatima
Apr 11th 2015
FR NO.1 I couldnt get it Fr No.1
Feb 21st 2015
Berha I send you a friend request please accept Berha
Feb 6th 2015
Umair Nice story Umair
Feb 5th 2015
subhana Good work but a little grammar mis takes Subhana
Feb 3rd 2015
Fatima I like this story.very nice Fatima
Feb 2nd 2015
Habibah Wwoooooooooooooowww Habibah
Jan 30th 2015

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