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Shehram Chaudhry
Shehram Chaudhry
Lahore School Of Learning
The Mysterious Girl
Published On Jan 23rd 2015
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As soon as i opened the door she gave a quick glance at me, pushed me and quickly went in the house. I tried to question her but she gave no answer. It was like her voice froze in her throat. I slammed the door shut and quickly called my mother. I told her to come back as soon as possible but i did not tell her the reason, when I hung up the call I saw the girl sitting in a couch. Her eyeballs were green and eyes slightly red. I was panic stricken.
Suddenly i felt a light breeze. I don’t know from where? i saw the girl disappear in the air in front of my eyes. I screamed and yelled. Terrified i searched the whole house for the girl but surprisingly she was nowhere to be found. Soon my parents came back home. I accounted them my experience but they wouldn't believe me. In fact no one actually did believe my story.
To be continued
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Comments 6
Irza GO ON.... Irza
Nov 5th 2015
 
 
Ayesha Grammatical mistakes but it is good Ayesha
Apr 19th 2015
 
 
Shaheer Nah. She wrote this one in her exams so just copied and refined it. @sherri You are also a psycho. Shaheer
Feb 10th 2015
 
 
Huzaifa Is this a real story??? Huzaifa
Feb 9th 2015
 
 
Berha Thats ok.. very good though Berha
Jan 31st 2015
 
 
shehram Sryy guys i guess a mistake this is the second part and the other one is first Shehram
Jan 25th 2015
 
 

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