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Shehram Chaudhry
Shehram Chaudhry
Lahore School Of Learning
The Mysterious Girl
Published On Jan 23rd 2015
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I was alone at my home. My parents had gone for shopping as my cousins were coming the next day.
Around 8 o clock i finished my homework and decided to read a horror novel. I went to my room to get the novel and then i came back in the lounge. I sat on the couch and started my book. After 5 minutes or so the doorbell rang. I got up and walked towards the intercom. I asked "Who's there?" No reply came. I questioned again. A small scared voice replied "Open the door." Mystified i walked towards the door.
Hesitatingly I turned the door knob. "Click" the door opened. What i saw was completely astonishing. A girl maybe of 7 or 8 years stood on door steps. She had a light skin colour. Rosy cheeks, black long curled hair which were not tied and she wore a plain white gown. Whatsoever, she looked very weird and terrifying. She was panting for breath.
To be continued
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Comments 9
Ayesha Stupid v shine hahahaha Ayesha
Apr 19th 2015
 
 
shehram Second is published before first i dont know why Shehram
Jan 31st 2015
 
 
Huzaifa I want to hear the next part as well cuz i think this frst part is GOOD:O Huzaifa
Jan 30th 2015
 
 
Huzaifa I want to hear the next part as well cuz i think this frst part is GOOD:O Huzaifa
Jan 30th 2015
 
 
Umair Gud Umair
Jan 25th 2015
 
 
Umair Gud Umair
Jan 25th 2015
 
 
shehram I did the second part bt i dont know how the other part is the second one Shehram
Jan 25th 2015
 
 
shehram No I wont leave this dont worry but I wont tie the loose ends at the end . Shehram
Jan 25th 2015
 
 
Maryam Don't leave it like the previous one!!! (incomplete) :o :p Maryam
Jan 24th 2015
 
 

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