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Berha Irfan
Berha Irfan
F.d.c Risalpur
The Haunted Neighbourhood (part 2)
Published On Jan 22nd 2015
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"Sid, the dealer, he makes deals with people that meet me on this day and bring this at this address and blah blah blah, he must be, he must be, Mr. Sondy couldn’t see his own child being kidnapped, Max you know I think that dad is in that car because I didn't hear him in Molly's room and second mom said that dad is out for a while""I think you are right Jack he must be Sid and probably dad might be in that carriage and might have told mom that there is a serious problem in the office and he must have gone to his car and picked up the person that has the money and who will take care of Marvin, but Jack is this a mystery or haunted neighbourhood?" Jack thought and spoke "A haunted neighbourhood for sure" then they were about to start munching their chips but Sid saw Max's boot sticking out of the bushes and start pulling him and of course he saw Jack too and kidnapped them too. Sid said to a man "Harry do you know these kids, they were lurking about?’  Harry knew that these are his children but he said "yes, I know them they are William and Smith they live on Tall Street they come here to pick roses from our garden, I don't know what they are doing so late at night"
To be continued
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Comments 6
Berha Thanks guys Berha
Apr 21st 2017
maha Omg. A father lied about his own kids Maha
Mar 13th 2015
Fatima Great Fatima
Feb 9th 2015
Wafa 10/10 amazing interesting (lol) Wafa
Jan 24th 2015
Berha Please comment Berha
Jan 23rd 2015
zahra A fabulous story Zahra
Jan 23rd 2015

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