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Fatima Tariq
Fatima Tariq
Bloomfield Hall School
The Haunted House (part 1)
Published On Jan 19th 2015
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Once there was a Hunted house no one lives in the house. One day there were four friends’ two girls and two boys named Emma, Bella, Jim and Max they were near the hunted house. What should we do in these holidays? asked Jim. I think that we must go to the hunted house said Emma. No way it looks so scary, said Max. We must go to the hunted house said Bella. Ok than we will go to the hunted house said. They entered the house it was dark. Do you guys see what I see said Max. No said Bella. The girl at the floor said Max. They all saw down there was a girl. They all ran Max ran to the bathroom, Emma ran to the bed room. Bella ran to the store room, Jim ran to the Guestroom. Emma saw in the bed there was the girl the grl caught Emma Emma shouted Help!!! Help!!! All ran to the bed room they saw there was not any girl. The girl she tried to kill me said Emma. We have to get out from the house said Bella.
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Manahil Wrong english! you should do a little more practice .Any how,it is good. Manahil
Feb 8th 2015
 
 
Noorul Nice....... Noorul
Jan 28th 2015
 
 
Berha So scary Plz write next part and quick Berha
Jan 21st 2015
 
 

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