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Fatima Tariq
Fatima Tariq
Bloomfield Hall School
Best Friends Sometimes Are Not True (part 4)
Published On Jan 18th 2015
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The next day Khadija said to Ayesha that you can come to my home today. Ok said Ayesha. Ayesha came. Ayesha and Khadija went up. I saw everything from the window Khadija showed her all cards to Ayesha I also gave her a card she said to me that it is the most beautiful card ever. She showed Ayesha that one card which I gave her. But Ayesh tore the card. Khadia get to much angry so Khadija slapped Ayesha. I saw Khadija when she slapped Ayesha. I ran to her home I asked her mother that can I meet Ayesha. Yes you can say Her mother I ran to her room. Khadija I said. Khadija looked back
To Be Continued
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Comments 5
raveeha U r a gud writer but instead of 5-6 small parts,plz write 1-2 bigger parts.i find it really hard to stand the suspense. btw,hav ur exams startd,n when will they end Raveeha
May 8th 2015
Fatima I will write part 5 Fatima
Feb 2nd 2015
Berha You still have not written fifth part Berha
Feb 2nd 2015
Umair Wat wrong wid ur best frnd Umair
Jan 25th 2015
Berha I cannot understand because of all these grammar mistakes but the things I understand are very nice Berha
Jan 21st 2015

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