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Aden Seerat
Aden Seerat
Bloomfield Hall School
Something In In The Room (part 2)
Published On Jan 18th 2015
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I breathed in horror. Oh my god I thought. Someone help!!!Help!! I shouted. Ever one came running. what happened asked the teacher. The girl I said. I looked pale. What girl? Asked the maid. The girl in my room fell from the balcony. My dear no one fell it was a nightmare said a girl. The teacher took me in her room and said I will be back in a minute. I sat on the bed and saw that girl again saying you will pay. For what? I asked. For............ but then she disappeared. At morning I was in the garden and a girl came to me.
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shehram Its not at morning its in morning , nice story though, and everyone can't come, i mean the whole world can't , this is a very silly mistake that we make. It would be better to specify who? Shehram
Apr 21st 2015
 
 
shehram Its not at morning its in morning , nice story though, and everyone can't come, i mean the whole world can't , this is a very silly mistake that we make. It would be better to specify who? Shehram
Apr 21st 2015
 
 
Berha Please write the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Berha
Jan 21st 2015
 
 
Fatima Please write next part this story is so HORROR!!!!!! Fatima
Jan 19th 2015
 
 

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