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Muhymin Imran
Muhymin Imran
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Friendship With Dinosaur
Published On Jan 15th 2015
Total Comments : 3
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Once upon a time me and my friends went to the jungle. After a hour we reached. We saw a hole in the hole a dinosaur is sitting. We scared and ran into another  hole we jumped in to the hole. After a 1 min  the dinosaur jumped in to the hole to his name is rapter. we scared again an d give him meat. rapter eating the meat after a while rapter friend ship us. why. i will tell you. Because we give him meat. we saw a lion we scared and ran rapter fight whit him rapter were scared too. lion jumped another dino came and  finish the lion and eating his body we go our home and live happily ever after.
By Abdul Muhymin Imran Choudhry
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Comments 3
Umair Yup mistakes but nice try Umair
Jan 25th 2015
Berha Lots of grammar mistakes and you are trying to make write it very fast so it isn't very good. Berha
Jan 18th 2015
uswa Pretty well Uswa
Jan 16th 2015

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