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Faiza  Ahmed
Faiza Ahmed
Pakistan Int'l School Jeddah
Why You Are Not There
Published On Jan 1st 2015
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why you are not there
i am alone apart from the world
you are the one who care about me
but now i am like dead
you are the one who cry with me
but now i am like stone
you are the one who make me happy
but now i am like frown
you are the one who realize me that i am some one
but now i am like no one
today i realize something that
friend ship with you is just like
a shining star with a moon
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Faiza Thnx fatima Faiza
Jan 10th 2015
 
 
Faiza Thnx fatima Faiza
Jan 9th 2015
 
 
Faiza Thnx fatima Faiza
Jan 9th 2015
 
 
Fatima Good Fatima
Jan 9th 2015
 
 
Adan This poem is a good one but there are many grammar mistakes such as putting of 's' at the end of some verbs. The corrections are following:- 1.you are the one who careS about me. 2.you are the one who crieS with me. 3.you are the one who makeS me happy 4.you are the one who realizeS me that i am some one Adan
Jan 4th 2015
 
 

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