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Shaheer Salah
Shaheer Salah
Lahore School Of Learning
Scarlet House Terror's (part 5)
Published On Dec 31st 2015
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The footsteps neared him. It  passed his dormitory room and went forward. Louis sighed and let go of his drapes.
 Next day he told this to his best friends. They wouldn't believe him. Also they had to check the shed at the end of the school property. Louis and his friends Jack , Mary , Peter and Alfred crept towards the shed. Mary and Peter were sweating, the others were scared but Louis the determined one boldly took the lead. The door creaked open as it gave way and they peeped inside. It was all dusty and webs made the scene spookier. There was dust everywhere other than the middle of the shed. It was all clean and tidy. Louis told his friends to start searching for something "mysterious". They all followed because they were used to his bossy attitude and also admired him. After a little while Mary screamed. When she was asked the reason for her screaming she told them that she had seen a mouse. They all laughed there heads off and Alferd even started rolling on the shed floor. As he did so he heard creaking of something. He tried to hear the voice again but couldn't. He got up and thumped the floor with his foot and to his surprise the floor gave way and he almost fell in the so called "abyss" but he gripped the the floor in time. The other children tried to pull him back but he was slipping from their small hands and slowly his hand slipped and he fell into the pit. "Ouf" was heard before total silence.
To Be Continued
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Comments 9
Shaheer Thnx Shaheer
Jan 15th 2015
 
 
Fatima Good Fatima
Jan 11th 2015
 
 
Fatima Good Fatima
Jan 11th 2015
 
 
Umair Yeah u do ....hehe Umair
Jan 7th 2015
 
 
Shaheer BTW guyz shud I chnge my nme to Mr BTW. It suits. Reply soon. Plz Shaheer
Dec 31st 2015
 
 
shehram Vshine very fast check my joke by the way Shehram
Dec 31st 2015
 
 
Umair Join this group guys if u r at Facebook https://www.facebook.com/groups/vshine123readers Umair
Dec 31st 2015
 
 
Umair Nice story Umair
Dec 31st 2015
 
 
Shaheer Wow fast publishing. And btw srry guyz its part 5 rather than 4 .lol Shaheer
Dec 31st 2015
 
 

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