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Shiraz Larik
Shiraz Larik
Karachi Grammar School
An Incident
Published On Dec 2nd 2014
Total Comments : 12
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Once it was a cold and deep night. I was waiting for the bus home. A car appeared in front of me. The door opened and someone pulled me in. I became terrified. I tried to run but couldn't. They took me to a haunted house and tied me with a rope. Suddenly I got a brilliant idea. I asked them if they would give me a glass of water. They brought a glass of water. I drank the water and with the help of the broken glass I cut the rope. I escaped from that place. I informed the police and the kidnappers were caught. The police told my parents. My parents were happy.
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Comments 12
Umair Gud Umair
Jan 10th 2015
jasmine Nice one Jasmine
Dec 29th 2015
yusra Good one shiraz Yusra
Dec 25th 2014
fizza Good Fizza
Dec 22nd 2014
ali Good man Ali
Dec 20th 2014
Maikham Good...... according to me if you will elaborate it a little so it will be fantastic.... It was just a suggestion. please don't mind Maikham
Dec 18th 2014
Khadija But how you broke the glass Khadija
Dec 17th 2014
Laibah Gud story buut i really commented to feel sorry for the poor kids @ army public school in KP, peshawar. may god defeat these barbarous customs of taliban. i mean, guys, hello!?!? who in the world would like to kill innocent, helpless kids for no reason?!!?!?!!?!?? Laibah
Dec 16th 2014
Noreen Good Noreen
Dec 15th 2014
safia Good! Safia
Dec 13th 2014
safia Good! Safia
Dec 13th 2014
salwa Nice Salwa
Dec 11th 2014

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