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Atiya Aslam
Atiya Aslam
Habib Girls' School
In A Stadium
Published On Oct 18th 2014
Total Comments : 24
Total Views :  981
11 People Like this!

September 2014

Rank 9 Out of 10
As the tossed coin goes higher,
The captains held their breath tighter,
The fielders entered the field,
A batsman swings his bat,
He knew he'll get tit for tat,
The commentators remained careful with words,
The bowler bowled his best,
The batsman is ready for his test,
Fans screamed and shout,
A finger is raised up for an out,
The coaches looked forward to success,
They hoped their players won’t make any mess,
People thinks it depend on how they play,
But I think it's a fate that makes a day.
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Comments 24
sajahir Great Sajahir
Sep 18th 2017
Urooj Please accept my request. Urooj
Jul 5th 2017
yashfeen Great rhyming Yashfeen
Jun 6th 2017
Irza Wow atiya.have you made it up urself? fabulous. u deserve to be the winner.:) Irza
Aug 27th 2016
sajahir Please add me i'm also a freind of wafa and maheen Sajahir
Aug 26th 2016
Areeba DEAR PLEASE ACCEPT my friendship request. I am also the friend of MAHEEN and PRINCESS ELSA. Areeba
May 28th 2016
Areeba Dear atiya, i want to be your friend. please................... Areeba
May 10th 2016
mubashra Awesome :) Mubashra
Feb 19th 2015
khadija Gud Khadija
Feb 18th 2015
afifah Nice! Afifah
Feb 18th 2015
Zahra GOOD creativity :) Zahra
Feb 6th 2015
Littlepari242 Fab :P Littlepari242
Feb 5th 2015
Littlepari242 Fab :P Littlepari242
Feb 5th 2015
Umair Congrats to be a winner… Umair
Feb 5th 2015
abeera Wow very good.......congratulations Abeera
Feb 4th 2015
Wafa It is very nice Atiyah congratulations for winning Wafa
Feb 3rd 2015
jasmine Nice but should be in poems Jasmine
Jan 26th 2015
jasmine Nice but should be in poems Jasmine
Jan 26th 2015
jasmine Nice but should be in poems Jasmine
Jan 26th 2015
Atiya Thank you Atiya
Jan 6th 2015
ali :*) impressed Ali
Dec 24th 2014
Abeerali Nice Abeerali
Dec 19th 2014
Atiya Thanks Atiya
Dec 17th 2014
zaid Awesome Zaid
Nov 16th 2014

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