Forgot your password?

Content on this page requires a newer version of Adobe Flash Player.

Get Adobe Flash player

 
My Page > Stories > In a stadium Bookmark and Share
  << Previous Story  |  Next Story >>  
Atiya Aslam
Atiya Aslam
Habib Girls' School
In A Stadium
Published On Oct 18th 2014
Total Comments : 21
Total Views :  659
7 People Like this!


September 2014
Like

Rank 9 Out of 10
As the tossed coin goes higher,
The captains held their breath tighter,
The fielders entered the field,
A batsman swings his bat,
He knew he'll get tit for tat,
The commentators remained careful with words,
The bowler bowled his best,
The batsman is ready for his test,
Fans screamed and shout,
A finger is raised up for an out,
The coaches looked forward to success,
They hoped their players won’t make any mess,
People thinks it depend on how they play,
But I think it's a fate that makes a day.
  << Previous Story  |  Next Story >>  

Comments 21
Irza Wow atiya.have you made it up urself? fabulous. u deserve to be the winner.:) Irza
Aug 27th 2016
 
 
sajahir Please add me i'm also a freind of wafa and maheen Sajahir
Aug 26th 2016
 
 
Areeba DEAR PLEASE ACCEPT my friendship request. I am also the friend of MAHEEN and PRINCESS ELSA. Areeba
May 28th 2016
 
 
Areeba Dear atiya, i want to be your friend. please................... Areeba
May 10th 2016
 
 
mubashra Awesome :) Mubashra
Feb 19th 2015
 
 
khadija Gud Khadija
Feb 18th 2015
 
 
afifah Nice! Afifah
Feb 18th 2015
 
 
Zahra GOOD creativity :) Zahra
Feb 6th 2015
 
 
Littlepari242 Fab :P Littlepari242
Feb 5th 2015
 
 
Littlepari242 Fab :P Littlepari242
Feb 5th 2015
 
 
Umair Congrats to be a winner… Umair
Feb 5th 2015
 
 
dua Wow very good.......congratulations Dua
Feb 4th 2015
 
 
Wafa It is very nice Atiyah congratulations for winning Wafa
Feb 3rd 2015
 
 
jasmine Nice but should be in poems Jasmine
Jan 26th 2015
 
 
jasmine Nice but should be in poems Jasmine
Jan 26th 2015
 
 
jasmine Nice but should be in poems Jasmine
Jan 26th 2015
 
 
Atiya Thank you Atiya
Jan 6th 2015
 
 
ali :*) impressed Ali
Dec 24th 2014
 
 
Abeerali Nice Abeerali
Dec 19th 2014
 
 
Atiya Thanks Atiya
Dec 17th 2014
 
 
zaid Awesome Zaid
Nov 16th 2014
 
 

Post your Comment
 
 
Close
 
 
Stories Drawings Jokes Articles Poems