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Gullasht Feyrozai
Gullasht Feyrozai
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Snow White And The Mystery Of Dracula (part 4)
Published On Oct 19th 2014
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When Snow had gone to church. All of sudden, the weather became cloudy and few drops of rain was fallen as, out of frying pan into the fire. She had no chanced to goes anywhere else the church.
In the church, she met her best friend Julia. Snow acquired from Julia about the house, because Julia had been lived in this house before Snow and her family lived here. Although, Julia was a loquacious girl but when she heard this sentence an amazing scene created. Snow was a theist girl, firm believed on God: but on account of fears he asked Julia an agnostic girl so, she says, "Snow did you believe that existence so, HE might be helped you by rescuing you from the Dracula, who is always behind beautiful girls or innocent girls".
As Snow had firm believed on God so, she prey in the church. At her home, where her look after her, they were worried about her. Her Mom says to her father, "Oh! Snow father, where is my little Snowie? You know what? She is telling us about the Dracula, who is always following her. She has curiosity about the Dracula and Oh! My girl where she is now?" At this moment suddenly Snow come and hug her Mom and Dad collectively then began to cry. 
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Gullasht AOA Aliza Dear it was a spelling mistake Gullasht
Apr 24th 2016
 
 
Aliza  Aamir Hey gullasht ur story rocks but.... pray: worship and the pray you wrote is prey and prey means a hunt of something e.g "a deer is a lions hunt" Aliza Aamir
Apr 12th 2016
 
 
Gullasht AOA I thought tooba you are new here,that's why you said it keep i touch ur own business OKAY f9 Gullasht
Jan 5th 2015
 
 
Gullasht AOA I thought tooba you are new here,that's why you said it keep i touch ur own business OKAY f9 Gullasht
Jan 5th 2015
 
 
Gullasht AOA I thought tooba you are new here,that's why you said it keep i touch ur own business OKAY f9 Gullasht
Jan 5th 2015
 
 
Tooba In all the parts there r sooooooooooo many grammatical mistake show r u in second year by the way Tooba
Jan 1st 2015
 
 
Fatima Bintey G0oD! eFf0rT Fatima Bintey
Nov 21st 2014
 
 
Mr There are some major grammer mistakes..... or else, your story and ideas are good. Mr
Nov 9th 2014
 
 
Gullasht AOA Manahil i just want to heared this from your mouth that's why i don't replied on ur's previous coment in previous part.ThankZzzz!.... yr Gullasht
Nov 2nd 2014
 
 
Manahil You can make it awesome by practising your grammar ,your idea is awesome!!!! Manahil
Oct 31st 2014
 
 
Gullasht AOA guyz plz lyk thiz Gullasht
Oct 25th 2014
 
 

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